| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Off to a really fun start! I'm dying to find out what the physiological (not genetic?) oddity is about calicos, and am charmed by the idea of Buyo having a role beyond napping, eating, and hissing. But then, I'm a sucker for Kirara. Looking forward to the next installment
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 20:19 EDT
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Helluva freat way to end the week - just love your AU's!! "More like she didn't want to see him again, so sentenced him to centuries alone in limbo,"
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story line...so far, obviously the poodle and the mutt scrape together reasonably well at this time. I always thought Buyo was male, was it even mentioned in the anime? Anyhow, so far so good, could be a bit longer, but the story has hopes of something to chew on in later (longer) chapters
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this! Your stories are always the best when it comes to Inu/Kag, well, I've only read the ones with Inu/Kag anyways. I love the modern-day theme for it, too.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 18:42 EDT
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Oh yes, this is going to be fun!
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Title: WHOO HOO!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look here I'm acutally dancing Yeah yeah yeah another chapter fic from finik and its a doosy of a first chapter too Yoow new fic awsomeness is overflowin from the comp to me. Until next time yippy skippy
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Reviewed By: Ice_Sick_El [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I like ^^ and I wouldn't say its a fetish, and much as a twisted part of me enjoying him eat dirt. I look forward to more~!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 16:27 EDT
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Interesting first chapter, reminds me of Phoenix Blade with a combination of canon and divergence. It's a bit difficult to judge what course of action you're going to take, this being the first chapter, but there's enough to draw a few ideas. BTW, I know all about the Kusanagi (*wink*), I had to research it for my "Love Thy Enemy" fic. That's the sword Susano'o cut from the yamato-no-orochi's tail, right?
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Reviewed By: Eppy_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed this. :D I would suggest a divergence from the order on monsters that appear. (Please no Naraku/Onigumo. T_T It's so overused to have him in modern times as the enemy; maybe a visit to his grave instead?)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing don't bring back kikyo. Lol! I mean having a dead women walk around in modern tokyo is way too unbelieveable. She's get hit by a car and turn to dust! Well at least she doesn't need to eat or go to the bathroom...
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