| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 21:42 EDT
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Isn't it amazing how feeling sorry for yourself can backfire? The one you love starts to feel the same despair and then you get pissed at yourself for making her feel that way. Nicely done with that whole scene. And I liked how you had Kagome's fear come back to bite Sha another way…almost literally. He must have the restraint of a saint to turn THAT down!!! Good thing he was thinking with his bigger head instead of the smaller one, because they don't need any more complications right now. Hehehe…even with all this angst you still manage to write in some pretty entertaining banter and some very entertaining necking. Oh, that Narakage is so deliciously twisted! 'Wear white and red for me' is a great line. He puts the canon Naraku to shame, and that's saying something! Can't wait for the 'dragon-shit to hit the fan.'
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 06:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappie. I wonder how they'll get aroud this one?
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2009 03:12 EDT
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Wonderful as always. One minor technical note though. Lunar eclipses only occur during a full moon. Its solar eclipses that happen during the new moon. But I love your theory that being born is their most vulnerable time and therefore sets their cycle.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So why isn't Inuyasha's human night as big of a deal as it used to be? Is it because he has Sesshomaru and his sons to look after him or is it because he has less crazy demons after him trying to kill him. Or is it both or none of the above. Well thank you for posting another great chapter! I hope you are doing well and I look forward to your next update. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things aren't looking good for sha, kagome and the rest of the good guys... what will they do... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: AH!! your so mean
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku is one nasty spidy (wear red and white can anyone say eww). You are a master tormenter, leaving us hanging in the place you did with the moon the way it was. Not to mention the tease there at the beginning. Until next time don't forget to feed the captives.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 07:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha he's been throughso much he can't lose Kagome now it's not fair! It was a great chappie darlin' lot's of emotions and thoughts running around. I can't wait for more. I wanna see what happens to Sota and Karin too.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 00:15 EDT
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with that kind of negative attitude he's going to lose her. he's gotta picture the bad guy gone and the tribe of 'doggy eared' kids running around terrorizing their uncle sessh. POSITIVE PONDERING, PUPPY!! ♠ one wonders the extent jak punished the poor boy-- he's putting up a brave front for the girl. any marks and scents naraku put on the girl-- surely to taunt sesshoumaru. anticipating the dogs getting a hold of him and paying him back for everything... in spades. ♠ just a little silliness: youtube.com/watch?v=-SnexEQW3YY ♥
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 22:12 EDT
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Sigh. Nice and long, too. I didn't want it to end, but when it did, I was ok with it, for the moment. Worth the wait. I loved the description of Sha in his 'feral' state. For me, the best part of this absolutely fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 17:36 EDT
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Yes, what price indeed? Loved the action this chapter. You have me scared shitless at what Narakage might have done to Miss Mifune. I'm expecting some more emotional turmoil from Kagome once the fatigue wears off. She hasn't really had time to think about killing that guard or Sota getting kidnapped. Sha's pessimism is another thing that needs to be dealt with, as it could end up hurting everyone in the end. If you don't believe you can win, then you can't. Excuse my rambling, but I tend to write too much when I'm into a story. Waiting eagerly for your next update!
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has GOT to be one of my favorites. This is a very new, original, NEAT I idea, and you make it flow perfectly. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter every time I get done reading. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 00:15 EDT
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Wow--what an action-packed chapter! I've been to the Metropolitan Towers, and picturing the fight going on so far above the ground was giving me vertigo! More random thoughts...poor Souta! And...Karin Mifune? Should I be flattered? ::smiles broadly::
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... seems that things aren't going well for the good guys... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Old lady swan dive good
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that "Jak" wasn't up to his canon gross-ness, and if he was I know you'll be sure to satisfy my need to read the bloody vengeance...Right??
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly felt like I was going to cry at the end. Normally, I find angst overdone but you do it subtly and it is so powerful. So overall, a great chapter that nonetheless has me praying for a happy ending.
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