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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it looks like Inuyasha is going to be getting plenty of action on his wedding night, just not the normal type of wedding night action. So was Kagome bitten by a shikigami? Maybe one controlled by Tsubaki? Don't tell me, I'll just eagerly await your next update. Thanks for the great update and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 21:47 EDT
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Is Kagome gonna be possessed? (oh god, did i spell that right?) Is Inu Yasha gonna figure it out? Is something going to happen to her family? Is is Kagura who re-applied her lipstick, or was is Jak? (cant spell full name...) I'm so curious! Don't leave me waiting for long please...
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 22:29 EDT
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I love this fic! It certainly puts a new spin on things, since I don't think I have ever read an almost canon fic where neither Kag nor Inu travelled through the well. And multiple reincarnations, Great idea! *** Anyway... poor Kagome. I think I'd be broken up pretty badly if one of the people I've known since middle school suddenly tried to kill me. And that is one unexpected engagement! I somehow expected that the grandfather wouldn't permit Kagome to move out til she was married (I'm Asian too, so it kinda applies here the same way. My father would probably rip out my boyfriend's throat if he even suggested it, lol.), but that was one rushed engagement agreement! I'm excited for your next chapter, since I reeeaaally want to see them get officially married. ^_^ Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 12:26 EDT
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Another great chapter!! Wow! So much is going on! I love it. :D
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 03:38 EDT
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Eh that was so good... i know i haven't written many reviews lately, so i thought i'd drop by and tell you how much i love this. Not just the style, which is so specific to you, but also the way you portray those characters. I think Buyo is by far my favorite :D Write more soon!
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Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha bet the old dude thought he'd get what he wanted when he laid down that condition. I didn't expect that at all, now I'm all hype for the next chapter (not like I'm not hyped for every other chapter ;)
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man, I was cackling when I read the latter half of this chapter. The parts with Sesshiro(Oh my God, I just love that dude! He's such a bastard! *cracks up*) the nephews' reaction, it was all bloody hilarious. And I must say, it's a very nice way to force these two together you've got going. Thoroughly enjoyed and savored, this was. Marvelous! XD
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 09:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappuie sweet :) topped of with a really touching moment at the ned can't wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel bad for kagome... seems that things just got more complicated... at least inuyasha is helping her... and now looks like they'll be married to each other... then maybe inuyasha & kagome's relationship picks up too... funny how the talks went between sesshoumaru and kagome's grandfather - it was all sesshoumaru deciding ... nice of inuyasha to comfort kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 03:28 EDT
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i got a kick out of his taking charge and spouting orders like a general (don't tell anyone but it made me squeal like a rabid fangirl). one cannot fathom how someone could throw away almost a lifetime of friendship on winning a championship *shakes head*. ♣ i like how the jewel goes off if she's threatened, like it's symbiotically connected to her being-- as long as she's alive they protect each other (hoping even through the ravishes of time). ♦ love an author who does their research and doesn't automatically just write in western customs and practices (that includes diet and decor). BRAVO!! ♠ well since they're already considered married... (it may not go over that great- his sleeping over- at least only jii-chan would protest). ♣ loved the nephews' responses! great chapter! ♥ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 19:05 EDT
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usual complaint, not long enough, but thoroughly enjoyed
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 23:04 EDT
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Well, I sort of called this one, but not really. I didn't expect Abi to wind up as a bloody, burned-out streak on the floor. Your descriptions throughout that entire scene were masterful; I could really get a clear picture of everything Sha was seeing. I liked the "living nightmare" parallel you drew between Sha and Kagome. At first, I wasn't too high on them getting married, but the more I got into it, the more I liked it. It's certainly different, which is usually a good thing, and I'm willing to give it a chance. And in the context of the traditional Japanese marriage and the culture as a whole, it makes sense. The ending to the chapter was very touching; we knew Sha would have to be the one to comfort her. Something tells me that Kagome isn't completely back to her normal self yet, but she'll get there. And *finally* they're calling each other by first names! I was almost hoping you'd have Sha prefer "Inuyasha," if only because "Sha" and "She" look remarkably similar as I'm reading and sometimes I think the wrong person is saying or doing something and have to reread. But if that's the biggest complaint I've got against your story, then you know you are doing a fabulous job. And you are. Can't wait for the wedding and the hijinks that are sure to follow!
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Title: Previously know as Little_Red
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 22:12 EDT
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I'm so happy that I checked my email, lol. Great chapter, was disappointed when it ended. Can't wait to read about the wedding. The name Sha really irratates me though, just so you know... I always think its she misspelled... But eh, I live... Yasha or Inu would have been better than just Sha... But whatever, anyway, again great chapter, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 21:01 EDT
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WooHoo! That was a real twist! Loved it! I laughed at the conversation between Inu and Sess about dismemberment and clothes, or the lack thereof. Love your quick wit and sense of humor. Buyo is awesome. I'd love to see her annoy Sess more. Sesshoumaru handled gramps very neatly...like the dismembered cats. LOL That was great! Being married and sleeping in separate quarters is going to suck! I wonder how Mrs. Higerashi is going to explain the marriage to other family members. That is a sticky one. So glad that the couple isn't having reservations over getting married. This is new and quite refreshing. Oh, aaaaaaaaaaand, let me assure you that Kagome doesn't know enough about the situation with Kikyou to pour angst all over it right now. At least, from my perspective. She hasn't had to deal with watching Inuyasha constantly run to Kikyou while she is in love with him. Thanks for that. Onward and...upward. The scene with Inuyasha taking care of Kagome was sweet. I liked how the guards bowed to her. I guess she is royalty now. It was funny when Inuyasha was bounding up the stairwell. I like that you've left him with some innocence; cute little puppy ears turning red. *snicker* It was a real surprise when Sess addressed Kagome as 'sister', cool too. Great chapter. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for Kagome to kick Naraku's ass. I don't have any feelings of sympathy for the girl that attacked Kagome. I know; not very Japanese of me. Too bad. I'm a violent American. Every Japanese anime/manga that I've seen with an American in it portrays the person as very violent. I wonder if that is how we are perceived. *shrugs* Good riddance to the bitch. We get to meet Sesshoumaru's mother! Say it's true! I just know you'd give us lots of fun with her torturing Sess! Yummies! I'll see you next time around. Thanks for posting this. ^_^ Snow
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Title: rinzechan
Reviewed By: rinzechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! Cliff hangers! Now it's time to play the waiting game o.O
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