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Title: e e eeevil women da na na na ah na
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooh!!! That damned Kikyo!! I could just slap her. Or cry cause I love the silver hair and puppy ears. AAH!! She's going to figure out the right wish right? RIGHT!!? (imagine me shaking your shoulders in desperation ok) I'm have a fit over here. But at least pervy wervy Narakage got his punishing. That was fantastic by the way.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:52 EDT
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Oh wow! Naraku is such a bastard! Poor Tsugane. I feel so bad for the poor guy. And now, Inuyasha and Kagome are going to have problems until Kikyou is dealt with. Gah! Awesome battle scenes. I loved how Inuyasha did in Jakotsu. Ah Uhn was full of awesome! The part with Kagome in the ashes was nice. I think you probably could have bled it for the angst a little more before you revealed her though. Heheh. Aw, it was so sweet of Sess to take Buyo up to the roof. Maybe he needed some time out. Poor guy. I can't wait to see him and Karin get together. ^_^ I imagine it will be a rough road for him. Can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kagome work through their newest problem. ^_^ Thanks for the quick updates and for writing!
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Title: Ooh ooh ooh...
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 17:50 EDT
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...tentacle sex! You shouldn't have! Of course, it *is* my birthday tomorrow.... Another terrific chapter. Great suspense, great pacing. Moar, please!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chappie. I hope they crush Narakage!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 23:06 EDT
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I am not a big AU fan, BUT yours is great! I love how formal everyone is (most writers have everyone acting like Americans)they seem much more realistically Japanese. Please do not keep us cliff hanging too long!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww..... i wanted to know how Kagome is going to kill Naraku!! lol i was happily here reading until i went to click the next chapter, and found out there wasnt any >.> anyways even though Jakotsu is evil, i still freaking love him XD and im just so... i dont know what to say really, i was too into reading that i cant summarise it all up into this... coz im afaird its going to take whats left 3062 but i cant wait for the next chapter.... and i dont know if the next one is the last but you gain a reader ^___^
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 20:48 EDT
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Ok, I'll admit it; I laughed at some of Jakotsu's antics. Teasing Souta about comforting Mifune, his reaction when Sha and the others land... Of course, I felt bad about it afterwards. I hope he gets a horrible death, and soon! Have I told you that you're really good at writing evil, deranged individuals? Case in point: I've never seen Naraku portrayed as insanely wicked before. But it's believable at the same time, not cliche. Know what I mean? My mind is kind of muddled; I'm still reeling from that killer cliffhanger! I'm not even going to try to guess what's going to happen next. I'll just sit here twiddling my thumbs until the next update. Oh, before I forget, I also wanted to compliment you on a fine battle scene. It was fairly short, but effective and exciting nonetheless.
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Title: Quite a Feat!
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an accomplishment--a non-gratutious tentacle sex scene that actually contributes to the plot. I stand in awe. And I liked the Inu clan in battle bits, too. Most enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 05:32 EDT
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i do believe you have sufficiently portrayed naraku's twisted and sadistic evil-- good (?) job! ♣ poor kid-- she's going to have to have a good bit of post trauma therapy. ♠ exciting chapter-- evil cliff... ♥;
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that their plan to get souta and karin worked but now it's kagome they have to get back... hope they finally find a way to defeat the enemies... why did kagome scream?... what will kagome do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 00:03 EDT
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Gah! Cliffy! Awesome chapter. I was so worried about Karin and am soooo glad that she is with Sesshoumaru now. Sota is a real character. He'd probably get up and fight right now. Maybe he can be an asset in the battle. Can't wait for it. You are so good at choreographing battle scenes. Man, it sucked that there was a spell to keep the bad guys from getting blasted when they touched the swords. Naraku is too damn smart. I'm sure that Sesshoumaru made them late so that dawn would come all the sooner and I hope they have the chance to put Naraku down for good. I just don't see how they can now. You've got me scared that something bad is going to happen to Kagome. I felt so bad for her mom. It was awe inspiring when Sesshoumaru bowed to the photo of her dad. You've got me all jittery and on the edge of my seat. Thank you for writing and for posting a great chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So is Kagome screaming because she is truly scared and panicking? Or is she trying to lower Narakage's guard? Well thank you for writing another amazing chapter. I look forward to the next update and until then I will wait with baited breath. Also, I hope your fall is going well and things are good in your life. Sincerely, Zach P.S. Rope Bondage eh...So did you know there is a manga manual on Japanese rope bondage? Maybe you should read it for ideas if there is going to be more Shibari in the future. :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANT!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 08:51 EDT
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LOL the last sentence kinda cracked me up abit XD anyways, this story is wonderfully written! inuyasha seems such a nice sweet and sensitive gentleman! hope you update soon! kimiko
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 17:08 EDT
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nice to see that after five hundred years he has matured and is now able to express his emotions. interesting that most authors don't think he can grow-- and the whole precept of the series is about personal growth and self discovery for nearly all of the characters. ♣ at least they're on the same page in their 'positivity' now. ♦ the height of audacity to deliver his taunt in person-- one believes that naraku may be a bit overconfident, it might just prove to be his undoing. ♠ youtube.com/watch?v=h9JgkA_Xq1E ♥
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