| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin' the happy ending! I got some of the references, not all--I'm glad you put them at the end for those of us who thought we figured out something! Really enjoyed the story--looking forward to whatever's next! Oh, and, the scene where Kagome 'died' and met her father (and all the connections there--I'm all about the connections!), that was the best--if I could vote, I'd say that is what it is truly like! Wonderful, all of it! Eve
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I wasn't expecting this next chapter to be the last chapter, but I think you did a wonderful job tying up all the loose ends and giving everybody their happily ever afters. I'm sure we haven't seen the last of you, so I shall sit back and await whatever new treasure you decide to come up with next!
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Title: I guess I'll just have to go watch trueblood now
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Its over *bawling like a baby*, I wasn't ready yet!!! What am I going to do now, read the dictornary *stomps off to pout*. Ok so now that I'm done thoughing a fit, I got to say that this was really fun to read, and I hope that this isn't the last time you'll write for Inuyasha (even though its over, I'm still pouting about that two years after the manga ended). Thanks as always for sharing your stories with the rest of us.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update... nice happy ending... seems that kagome and sha were able to help a little girl... karin is a nice addition to family too... good that kagome was able to get rid of the jewel and see her father again... glad that sha and kagome finally were able to be together in the end... wonderful story... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 00:52 EDT
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Well, When I said it was going to be a good ride, I wasn't kidding. Fenik, you supplied enough twists and turns to make this a wicked, good read, and kept my mental movie screen busy. I have enjoyed this story every bit as much as everything else of yours that I've read. Thanks for another wonderful story, can't wait to see what you come up with next. LOL
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chaptere. I'm glad Kagome's finally making some kind of peace with the jewel :)
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2010 20:29 EDT
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Well that was a quick battle. Clever girl, Kagome! I was hoping Sha had a good reason for being MIA, but it appears he hasn't completely grown up yet. I was surprised Sess didn't smack him one, or Kagome for that matter. It's interesting to see Karin coming to terms with her role as pseudo-mother to the boys, and of prospective mate to Sess. I LOL-ed when Tenmaru told them to get a room. :-) Also interesting was that the fact that much of this whole thing was out of her control is catching up to Kagome. Loved the lime, the hair touching, the mutual self-gratification. People can be very creative when they're horny. XD I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! And what an update! Progress, progress, progress... Both with you and your story, as well as with Kagome and the jewel! I wonder how long it'll take Kagome to realize the "right wish" is to simply wish the jewel away... or is that not the route you're planning on taking? After all, even that wish could backfire if it simply disappeared, and she died from a giant hole in the heart! Also, she wants to keep and use the jewel if at all possible, as well she should...if at all possible. So maybe your "right wish" won't be the canon "right wish"...either way I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, and I'm really looking forward to your "new moon" chapter...as is Inuyasha, I bet. *wink*
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 14:25 EDT
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Another killer chapter (well killer for one unlucky kitsune). Love how things are starting to move along. I hope Kagome can keep up with her increasing control over the jewel otherwise its lots of cold showers for poor InuYasha. I also continue to love how culturally correct you are making the story, it really adds an extra dimension!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 01:01 EDT
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i guess with the emergence of such threats one after the other the jewel isn't going to allow any youki near her since naraku, unless kagome either finds the right wish or learns to completely control its reactions. one can think that a little tingle wouldn't be all that bad (interesting sensations), it's when it starts sizzling... ♥
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Title: Wicked Awesome
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this chapter had pizazz, heart pounding action, fuzzy fluff and puff, heelarious in character squabbling, something we've been hoping for and a tease to send it home. It sure was satisfying reading this today, kind of like good food satisfying.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 20:40 EDT
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WooHoo! So much action. One fried kitsune, Rin moves in, Kagome nearly blows down a building, and hot, hot foreplay. ^_^ I'm so glad that the boys were okay. So glad that things are better with the jewel, but still no hot sex! *stomps foot* LOL Great chapter. Loved Sesshoumaru's gentleness with Rin's emotions. He's being so patient. ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of happenings occurred... seems that kagome is making progress with the jewel but still not good enough for sha to get close... looks like karin will be staying with the house of the west now too... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2010 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful, I love reading it. I love reading your work, it really paints a picture in my mind. I have also read The Pheonix Blade: Time Lapse, which by the way is my favourite story of all time. I am sorry that your friend has passed on, I first heard of Neko's passing when I read the most recent chapter of Hearts Landfill(wonderful story also, should check it out if you haven't).
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2010 01:30 EST
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NOOOO!!!!!! ive been reading this story for the past couple of days in my spare time. and its become addicting to me. and then i got to the last chapter, and went to hit the "next" button, so i could read more only to find out ITS NOT THERE!!!!!! :'( im so sad! this is such an awesome story and i was dreading coming up to the part where I couldnt go on! PLease please please update soon! this is an amazing story and i absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Definitely one of the best ive read :) So keep up the great work!!!!!!!
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