| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 12:34 EDT
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Feni! I love the idea of Inuyasha staying pinned to the tree, I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. How long will be before Inuyasha tells her the truth? Looking forward to all updates
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 23:57 EDT
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Whoot! I love it! And the chapters are long which is fantastical! I love that you put the Shikon in Kagomes chest... Being in her hip never made sence to me...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 19:32 EDT
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well described. i hate when someone puts up a whole page describing everything down to the fabric and design on the throw pillows. you gave us just enough to form the basics and allowed our imaginations to fill in the details. BRAVO!! ♣ love the fact that he still wears the fire rat, just not as obviously. ♦ one wonders what he's been doing for the past couple centuries and having an interesting time imagining his life in that time. not too concerned if it has no correlation on the story. ♠ this is a wonderful new story and i will continue to eagerly anticipate more. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...the jewel is in her heart...that sucks. Poor kagome. This is going to be a really good story! Buyo is an interesting character by the way. Could she be Kirara or an OC?
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Buyo's character totally rocks!! She has a marvelous sense of humor. He he. And I noticed that Yash said that Buyo wasn't her real name. So......does that mean she could be, say, Kirara? That would be quite interesting. And well, pretty awesome as well. Loved the chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 18:13 EDT
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so far so good :) Yes I am waiting for the next chapter no I am not printing THIS one and yes I have it saved, In a few places I felt there was wording missing, but that could just be me Till next time
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! I didn't see that coming, Buyo becoming a humanoid main character like that, but I like it! Two chapters and I'm already hooked.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the story of billy joe and bobby sue...wait no, thats a song he he.. I can wait for more but I don't want to. Its a good thing I'm an adult or I might be thoughing a fit cause I want to keep reading for...EVER ha ha but I'm an adult so I'l wait patiantly until the next update
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 14:06 EDT
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Another excellent chapter--loved the interplay between Sha and Buyo, and the way that you're spinning out the alternate history, with the same key event but arranged differently. Also interested in the very different relationship that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have in this universe...good stuff, all around! Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh yes, this is going to be awesome. What a devilishly fertile plot bunny. Can't wait to see how this goes!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start! (And I mean that in a definite good way. XD) Can't wait to read more! Woo! I giggled at Buyo. Go Buyo! XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 17:58 EDT
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one wonders who the green eyed guardian[?] is. quite an interesting twist. ♣ i loved the whole 'yash in leathers' thing you had going in 'phoenix blade' so it's great to see you perpetuate the image in this. *drools* ♦ you have such potential to take this to new heights, i'll be waiting on pins and needles for future installments! ♥ thank you!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Inu AUs and you write the best! Phoenix Blade was amazing. This first chapter was great and has really peaked my interest on where you are going to take this story. Dont keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Fantastic, as always. I already love the detail and depth this promises. Nothing like thoroughly complicated characters;) Great work, hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 02:25 EDT
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Great start to a new story, my dear! I enjoyed your take on a alternate first meeting between Kagome and Inuyasha, and can't wait to see where you're going to take this story.
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