| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous. I love your stories. This one is promising to be as good as the others, even better maybe. I'm looking forward to the updates.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 04:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Action packed as ever, I think you should be call the fanfic action queen. I'm always transported when I'm reading one of your stories. I started and one and the next thing I know forty five minuets are go. Until next time...
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Title: The Fenik Spin
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 14:13 EDT
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I just love the spin you put on the events that led up to their meeting, and how you work the old with the new. When I was watching the show, and reading the manga, I always hoped that Buyo would turn out to be Kirara, but that never happened. At least she's a youkai in this story. It's good to see Yura again, such a pretty little bad girl. She's a partial manifestation of my long hair fetish. I just don't go to the lengths she does to indulge it, lol. Fenik, I just love the way you use words, we would probably be good friends in real life, you have a very fine touch with humor, and an almost perfect way of describing a scene without getting caught by the infinate details. OK, now I sound like a rabid fangirl, guach, I'll stop now. Great chapter???
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah hahaha, he finally revealed himself! That was such a cute part how much Kagome loved his ears. ^.^ Man, talk about a lot of blood and guts. Whew! o.o I know he hasn't been in it much, but I love Sota. :p lol Thanks Fenni! Keep up the awesome work!!!
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Reviewed By: porkchop_27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 22:01 EDT
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I love it. :) Cannot wait to read more!
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That clif got me in the end...I'm so happy to read from you again though. I'm looking forward to more silly fights with gramps, so funny.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 01:20 EDT
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...I wont lie... It took me a minute to get the Izayoi(sp?) refernce... But anyway, I love that you're putting Yura(sp?) in it. No one uses you anymore... Can't wait for the next chapter so hurry up yo!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 21:17 EDT
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Another delightful chapter--the dialogue really sparkled, and I love how you're hitting the beats of the early episodes (Mistress Centipede, Yura of the Hair) while still spinning out your alternate train of events. I particularly loved the interchanges between the youkai in this chapter: "A clever man… or hanyou… could negotiate a dowry that included the object of his desires." "Congratulations on breaking your previous record of being purified by its protector; last time, several months… this time, only a matter of hours." Yay, Sesshoumaru has apparent gained a sense of humor in the intervening centuries!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaismyhero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see another story from you! This one is starting out wonderful, I'm totally captivated and always waiting to see what you'll come up with in the next chapter =D Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this story! Thanks for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... what a cliffhanger! You're a killah, Fenik! Such a deliciously detailed chapter, I loved it. Already so steeped in history and disaster. Plus, Shikon Snack? Mercy! Too funny. Look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 16:29 EDT
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nothing like a formal introduction. one can just imagine the gears turning in the girl's head. (especially since the 'hanyou' is no longer sealed to the tree) at least he's proved that he intends no harm and actually helped her and her family. ♣ i like the teasing comradery that seems to be developing with the two-- he seems more distant and businesslike- albeit, he did have something to hide.*sniggering* and nice way to introduce yura. ♥
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 15:44 EDT
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Ooh, in comes Yura. So, seeing as Mistress Centipede has alreay made an appearance, does this mean that you're going to be following some of the major events of the anime in an AU style again, as with Pheonix Blade? If so, sweet. I personally love the way that you rewrite the anime's events. XD Another marvelous chapter!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 17:22 EDT
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ah hahaha love it! :D My favorite line was: "She smells fucking wonderful. Lucky I don't have my hanyou senses, or I'd be glassy-eyed and drooling." I was giggling non-stop. I am so curious as to how this will unfold and how their relationship will change. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up!! :) :)))
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Reviewed By: porkchop_27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story so far! It's a very refreshing read, and Buyo's character is very interesting as well. Kudos! Can't wait for a new chapter!
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