| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 16:48 EDT
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not so keen on the whole 'reincarnation' thing but maybe since kagome has the jewel she may have an extended life so yasha won't have to do the whole 'wash-rinse-repeat' thing. other than that i love the brothers/uncle bad-mouth interactions-- seems like they might just egg him on a little for the amusing reaction. =D ♥
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Another great chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I forgot to rate. So, here's another review, if the site'll let me. And I also forgot to mention my extreme appreciation for Sha's chosen form of transportation. There's just something about that hanyou sitting on a bike... ;-)
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:55 EDT
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I think I'm certainly going to like the nephews. What marvelous jobs they do at pissing off their uncle! Althoguh... *shiver* That whole thing with Naraku's ear rather creeped me out. But that's totally great, seeing as Naraku is rather creepy himself. Lovely chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aaaah, you just cheer me up. I'm waiting for emails... waiting waiting waiting. Then finally, after so many updateless days(Cry, sob, whimper), I get one! A great one it is too. I am enjoying the two nephews. Thier personalities are very nice. No more hiding updates and laughing at us desperate readers. It's very mean. Just kidding, I'll be waiting for the next.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aahh!! Naraku already sssssss! (that his is for him) until next time YEA!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter, Feni! :) My fav line was: ""How do you do it?" Kagome finally demanded in exasperation. "You take off your helmet and presto, you have babe hair!"" Hee hee hee XD The interaction with Kagome and Inuyasha were great! I love how they're certainly starting to more and more "feel each other out" so-to-speak. Muwaha, can't wait for more motorcycle rides!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story and events... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 16:46 EDT
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*dances happily* Yea! Not only did I get the pleasure of reading a new chapter of this wonderful tale but I actually got someone else hooked. I fully expect you will see a spike in your readership when the next chapter of "Metamorphosis" comes out and he lists this as his fic of the week recommendation.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 15:17 EDT
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aww poor Kagome getting all this information thrown at her. And the ending was a bit creepy, but I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, you got me. I don't usually read unfinished stories, but this one was recommended to me by another reader and now I'm hopelessly hooked. I will be eagerly awaiting your next update. This story is immensely entertaining. It made me laugh, plus it's very suspenseful even though you're working with events that happened in the anime/manga. Your style of writing is finely polished as well. I especially love the bare hints of romance you are giving us. Slow buildup is wonderful to see; I'm glad you're not going to have them hop into bed with each other immediately. Though she was sleeping against him in chapter 4... But that's different. Sorry for rambling a little, but it's not often these days that I find a story that so catches my interest. Please continue writing and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 23:08 EDT
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teehee, made me giggle... but you sure did take long enough... so are you gonna follow the manga? intruducing characters in that order? are you gonna skip some of them? (im assuming a yes for that one...) is buyo kilala(sp?)? those are all the questions i have for now... im not really exspecting an answer but it would be appreciated... and forgive my spelling... im typing side-ways, its quite the challenge..
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 22:20 EDT
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Woo, action filled chappie! That Yura is nasty business, but I love that he's revealed himself now. Oh Inu, always a glutton for attention;) Lovely work!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 08:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Caught you.... :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 02:00 EDT
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one would think that kagome's reaction to his true appearance would really stoke his ego. ♦ i like the 'older' souta, maybe he could be of some help-- he seems to be pretty shrewd. ♥
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