| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 20:08 EDT
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i can imagine jak dressed as ganguro or gothic lolita making kissy faces at yasha (there's something -wrong about that girl). ♣ he should realize that kagome is a 'good girl' who probably never snuck out of the house to meet friends or hang out-- and compounded with her jii-chan's overprotective nature, she'd never been kissed and wouldn't have been ready so soon after having just met him a few days ago (in spite of her being in her early twenties) her reaction should have been expected understood. ♠ when they take kagome into custody her family may still be targeted for ransom. *shrugs* --just ignore the rantings of the crazy old woman (except when she tells you it was a great chapter). great chapter! ♥
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 19:10 EDT
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The apolcalypse: Inuyasha shares his ramen! LOL. I really liked how you portrayed "Sesshiro," and his encounter with Buyo. Sha's resentment was literally hanging in the air the whole time, which really brought the scene to life. Ah, the power of making a good impression with your possible future-girlfriend's mother. Yet another outside force pushing them together. The only things pulling them apart seem to come from within. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 00:04 EDT
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teehee... nephews are wonderful at distracting from a potentially deadly situation... the confusion kagome would have felt with such a kiss... anyhwo, cause wait for next chapter. hurry up and update!
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ha! Dude got pwned! *blows party whistle thing* Take that you draconic bastard! Ya know, I don't think Sha is very happy with his nephew at the moment. That guy has some rather unfortunate timing... And of course, I loved it. Is it just me, or does Sota seem to have a bit of a crush on Miss buyo? Hm...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 21:59 EDT
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so the cat's out of the bag and the spider's on the loose. it's all gone to the dogs and the girl seems dazed and confused. --mama and jii-chan are clueless. =that about sums it up. ♦ great chapter!! ♥
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 15:16 EDT
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Wow! Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting events happening... so naraku showed himself already... at least inuyasha has his sword... good that buyo helped them... glad that inuyasha's nephews came to help with the clean up... what's next... update when you can.. please and thank you!
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Title: Mm... potatos (homer growl)
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nasty dragon using snake, I hope he enjoyed that body removal service from Kagome. I'm frying potatos so I can say more but I loved this chapter, and I hope Inuyasha sneeks that kiss he was after sooner rather then later
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 22:10 EDT
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aww poor Inuyasha getting so worked up. And his poor motorcycle haha. And now I'm sure Kagome is even more confused! I can't wait to see how Inuyasha will react to the interruption hehe. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 18:39 EDT
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"I'm afraid that one of the casualties of Uncle's Kaze-no-Kizu was his dearly beloved motorcycle." Poor, poor Sha. That line made me laugh pretty hard. It was also funny how Sota got all embarassed when he realized the cat he'd been petting and sleeping with for years was a female youkai the whole time. Here's hoping we see more of Buyo in the future; the dog/cat interaction is very entertaining. The fight scene was great too. Naraku is up to his old tricks, and he's creepy as ever. I wonder what else he's got up his sleeve...
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 18:04 EDT
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Action triple plus! *Rolls in catnip* Aaah, nothing like a good action fuck. LOL Thank you! I love this. Foot long claws? Go, Buyo! My head isn't in constructive critique mode. I'm too high on the battles. This story is totally fucking awesome! As are the characters. I love all of your characterizations. Sota is cool. Please don't kill any good guys off this time. *whines* Tetsusaiga was so awesome when it almost overtook Inuyasha. Nifty idea. The dra-gon is to-oast! Hahaha. I can't wait to find out the significance of Mrs. Higarishi's ancestry. Oooh, can't wait til Sess tries to woo Rin. That will be so much fun because he is sooooo old. LOL I'm too hyped up to really say much except that I really like this fic. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie darlin' this is going to get interesting :)
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 22:29 EDT
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Not even halfway through chapter one, and I'm choking on my laughter. "Holy Fucking Gods!" Hahaha...
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 22:00 EDT
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i thouroghly enjoy your random bits of information... they make me feel smart when i am able to spew them out at my friends later on... kudos for you and upping my self esteem... update soon!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 17:35 EDT
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Ah, you gotta love the mutual jealousy! The new characters are cool too, though I'm glad that Sha doesn't have to take too much crap from them. At least they seem to know their place. They certainly do piss him off though xD I didn't expect to see Naraku himself so soon, but I like being surprised. I can only guess what he has planned. I wonder if you will continue to adapt events from the anime/manga. Maybe Tsubaki or Gatenmaru, for example? Will Sha go full-youkai? When will he get Tetsusaiga back? So many questions! I eagerly await your next updage.
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