| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Not a cliffhanger! Man, you do such a great job building up suspense and capturing the character's personalities that I just want to read on and on. Then I come to the end of updates and I have to wait for new chapters. It is just so cruel... Anyway, thank you very much for continuing to update this story and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 14:52 EDT
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aww and Inuyasha was trying so hard to protect her too. What a cliffie! That would be really traumatizing having you're team mate attack you... I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: You had me at...
Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 23:06 EDT
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I've read and enjoyed other fanfics by this author, but the fact that she mentioned 'The Tale of Genji' was icing on the cake, as it were. Weird as it may sound, Genji is one of my absolute favorite books of all times, but only in the unabridged edition and definitely only the Seidensticker translation, not Arthur Waley. Anyway, this story is good, so far, and I look forward to reading more. Gambate, Fennikusuken from your fan on Orcas!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 05:02 EDT
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i forgot to add the simi-colon to the &hearts to make it ♥ sorry! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♬ ♪ ♩ ♬ >=P
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 04:59 EDT
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i just remembered this-- in reference to the wash-rinse-repeat reincarnation soul-mate stuff-- i thought you would enjoy!! so, enjoy: youtube.com/watch?v=Gaid72fqzNE &hearts ginny
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Reviewed By: lyiint [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 10:32 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for two categories: Best Original Character (Buyo) and Best Serial for the first quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the rest of the nominations, seconding, and voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www (dot) inuyashafanguild (dot) com. If you have nay other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator @ gmail (dot) com. Congratulations again! ~IYFG Beta Group
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 14:37 EDT
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Ah, so much joy in this chapter--the ribbing over Inuyasha sharing his ramen...the lovely banter between the neffs...the honorable interment of the motorcycle...and the HAUNTED HIBACHI! I nearly killed myself laughing. Lovely chapter, highly entertaining as always, and I liked your translation of Band of Seven as modern-day yakuza toughs.
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Title: Previously know as Little_Red
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 01:41 EDT
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I don't really like that you had Kagome affirm, if only herself, that Inu Yasha see's her, and not Kikyo... You completely skip a major part of their relationship that way... But I don't know maybe you'll have her wishy-washy and she'll continue to need reaffirming...
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 19:45 EDT
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wonderful two chapters. cant wait for the next one. keep up the good work dearie!!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 20:54 EDT
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I was out of town for the last week, so I got to read two chapters in a row! Whee! :) Great action! Arg, stupid Naraku. Don't touch Kagome! Sha will keel you! The almost kiss was so cute. ^.^ And I am loving the characters of Sha's nephews. They are so fun! Definitely taking after their mother, eh? hee hee
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 04:41 EDT
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oooh the secret about Inuyasha's mother is nearly out. I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts to that. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome, inuyasha & everyone are doing fine... sesshoumaru has made his presence known... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: The band already!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its nice to know that the nephews or on our side. Keep pushing potty mouth in the right direction.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 20:47 EDT
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Damn! I almost forgot. I knew Ms. Higerashi has to be Izayoi's re-incarnation! Now all we need is Inupapa!!!!! Please, please? Unless youkai don't get reincarnated. Darn. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 20:41 EDT
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Aw, it was so cute when Buyo begged for attention. Thanks for that little sweetness. Hm, protective custody on the Western grounds would probably be safest for the Higerashi's, but then mama would probably have to be told. I don't like the idea of Kagome lying to her. Then again, mama, Souta, or Granda could be kidnapped and held for trade. Sucks all around. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru told Inuyasha to do as he liked. It makes me wonder if Kagome isn't right about him. Seriously, he could have chomped and swallowed Inuyasha in his father's tomb and didn't. He just knawed on him a little. LOL Seriously though, I like how you portrayed him. Though Inuyasha seems more mature, you've managed to keep his appearance of childish innocence. It's weird how you can do that. Can't wait to see the Western grounds! I hope there's a tenbaryu! Ooooh, The Band of Seven. I'm glad you used English. Thanks. Jerks. Can't wait for them to die horribible, painful deaths. Hehehe. Inuyasha is one smart cookie for sending out a search party for the missing two. Thanks for letting his intelligence shine. ^_^ Be seein' ya the next chapter around. Thanks for posting! Snow
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