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Reviewed By: FW On: March 25, 2009 03:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're writing is never boring. You're characters are always different, and yet still remarkably in character. It's not secret that you're the best author in the DBZ universe. Let's not kid ourselves. I'd say you were professionally educated in writing! Please continue to enhance our lives with your work. Thank you! We can never say that enough.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 22:31 EDT
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I'm was so happy when I saw that you had written another BV fic. It's good to see another well-written a/u from you. Very dark and so very full of tension. I can't wait for more.
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Title: Yay, Quick Update
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 21:47 EDT
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Thanks for not having us wait too long! Seems you're on a roll with this one and I certainly hope you keep dishing them chapters at this rate? *crosses fingers*. I for one, actually think this is different from what I've normally seen from you in terms of characterization. The angst is a lot more palpable here. It's very good Tempest, and it's very good you're back in the fandom. You just never know when you're gonna get that BV itch eh? It just never completely goes away.
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Title: interesting.
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 20:42 EDT
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This is very different from what i've read in the past. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: March 24, 2009 19:56 EDT
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I was pretty surprised to see the message in my inbox. I haven't read stories on mediaminer for a really long time, but yours got me back reading. Can't wait to see what's going to happen.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 24, 2009 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand why people are being so critic about the characterization. This is Vegeta and Bulma, there's only one way of writing them. He's proud and rough. She's smart and feisty. Your style of writing is what got me accompanying your stories in the first place. I don't want it to change. This is a unique story in my opinion, although I'm not one to read many AU stories (just yours lol). Vegeta does seems less intent on murdering Bulma at first sight in this one lol. I won't risk saying he's softer, but I guess he wouldn't be so angry at her in this version because she's basically in the same situation as him. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 16:50 EDT
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Ohh I'm so excited and at the same time scared!! I'm dying to know what will happen but at the same time I'm scared that it will be something horrible :s Hell..I'll just have to wait and see..but again..a job very very well done ;-)I certainly love ya :D Update plz..(a)
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Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 10:55 EDT
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It has your really nice poetic style of writing. The only thing is that the characterizations and premise seem very much like your other stories. I hope it unfolds in a unique way. The thing I'm always curious about is the changes Vegeta must have had to make to adapt to Freeza and Zarbon's 'culture' when he became a purger for them. How much did that affect his Saiyian upbringing. Freeza always strikes me as being like a depraved roman emporer like Nero who was extremely hedonistic and self serving as portrayed in your stories. You convey that sense of Ice jin culture well here. I always wonder what the motivations for that are in his culture. What else makes him tick? The thing that strikes me is that with Zarbon is he's always portrayed as being of the same mind as Freeza. Yet in the series he seems to be of his own mind. I would be intrigued to see him thinking more for himself and what motivates him to see Vegeta and Bulma as captives entertaining him. I realize this is an AU. I hope I don't see off base. It's just my impression. But I'm very happy to see you writing again!
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Reviewed By: tryniamerin On: March 24, 2009 10:48 EDT
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I'm curious to see how this will turn out! Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 05:39 EDT
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Nice to see you back to fandom. It´s beautifully written, but the end of the text reminds me Surviving Together, when Vegeta had to have sex with Bulma in front of Zarbon.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 22:32 EDT
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Something new!! I like it. Haven't read much on my favorite couple in a very long time. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are undoubtedly one of my favorite authors and I am thrilled that you decided to start another story. The beginning is wonderful and I can not wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 22, 2009 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost couldn't believe my hotmail, when it said you had another story!!!! This is absolutely a great start! I hate Zarbon and Keice already lol! Poor Vegeta...he always get the rough ends.
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Reviewed By: aquila333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 10:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice start here. it's original and well writian. no bad grammer or spelling mistakes. i can't wait for the next part of the story. what happens to our favorite couple? please don't wait too long to update!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta (jut not logged in) On: March 22, 2009 09:30 EDT
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Gods I love you girl! It looks like another start of another great fic...just like all the others..this one looks great and i can't wait for the next chap! Don't keep us waiting for too long!
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