| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Corinna On: April 25, 2009 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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love this story!! i can't get enough of this, really
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 24, 2009 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote the BEST Bulma/Vegeta fics out there and still you continue to rock! This was such an intense chapter regarding their emotions, we all know Vegeta is falling hard, he just didn't realise it lol. I absolutely shook with that line: "You have no idea what I'm going to do to you once I get this collar off." The smoldering intensity of his promise made hot, wet sensation gush to the apex of her thighs. >>>Oh My God!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 23:46 EDT
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Ah, bonding. Cute chapter. I love how you're making them interact this time 'round. Keeps me wondering what'll happen next?
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 22:38 EDT
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I love romance novels to for just a brief moment to be swept away in a lovers embrace, and listen to his words of "LOVE" ok back to reality! Great chapter. can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 21:02 EDT
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Wow this was a smoking chapter! I can't believe I was out of town for this! Ack! But you know me, something about your writing gets my imagination going and then POOF! I have to sketch something out. This chapter was no exception. Although I think this pic may be too much for Deviantart *wink wink*. Another chapter well done!
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Title: Chapters 7 & 8
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not the words to describe how absolutely delicious that was. The violence in chapter 7 was dirty and bloody and wonderful. I loved the whole scenario, and especially adored their interaction at the end. Now, chapter 8 was beyond words. Aside from it putting an idiotic grin on my face, I got flutters and tingles all over from how vivid it was. It was sexy, period. Keep up the fantastic work!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 22:16 EDT
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Hoo, I'mma need a cold shower after that one. Good job, as always!
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Title: Chap 8
Reviewed By: starburst On: April 20, 2009 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-melts- :P
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Title: Words escape me
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 19, 2009 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. All I can say right now is... wow.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: FroggyBIZ On: April 19, 2009 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best sex scene ever
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Title: this is the best fic ever
Reviewed By: starbrella On: April 19, 2009 22:47 EDT
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Like i said. i'm hooked onto this fic like crazy, i love the story line! i love how original it is, i love your writing style! i love not knowing whats going to happen next! i love everything about this fic! Please update this sooN!!! i've done a great job so far! keep up the amazying work!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: NetteTeTigress On: April 19, 2009 22:15 EDT
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"Are you putting a barrier between us and death, Vegeta?" "Impossible. I am death," Fucking awesome..you are a genious writer..beautiful chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 21:18 EDT
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Once again, a wonderfully delivered chapter. It's good to see them finally indulging in each other. Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 19, 2009 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Impossible. I am death," he told her ominously. "And right now, even the Gods wouldn't dare get between me and your tight little body." That was the sexiest thing I've ever read. Again you amaze me with your delicious writing. I think you are absolutely the best writer ever, especially when it comes to smut. Vegeta is simply lethal in this one, it makes me love him even more.
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 20:49 EDT
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I'm glad to know, that for a small moment they felt heaven. Great chapter. Now the sorrow begins.
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