| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 18:02 EDT
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Awe I'm very sad to see this is the end (for now). How could Vegeta leave her like that, it breaks my little heart (and no doubt his and hers as well). What is poor Bulma gonna' do? She can't read or write in that foreign language, she has no money, no idea how the technology works, and no place to go. Ack I can't want until the sequel already! I hope this next story picks up were this story is dropping off. I truly am excited to read more! As for the Gohan X Videl fic...I'm not too interested. I'm such a snoob that I'm a V/B only fan =P But I'm sure whatever you write will be good. Plus I love drawing V/B *wink*
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 17:18 EDT
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Oh wow, what an ending. I knew they would have to part and expected it to be on bad terms despite their growing relationship, but you still managed to make it complete unexpected. A beautiful fic through and through. What will happen now? I can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 17:04 EDT
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holy crap, that's the END AH. pleaaaase write that sequel ASAP for the love of god. haha, in case you didn't pick up on it, great chapter and fabulous story. i love it. oh and HELL YES TO GOHAN AND VIDEL. that would be such an interesting story and i'm sure as amazing as your others!!
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: May 07, 2009 15:39 EDT
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What a great ending! I swearing reading an update of your stories brightens up my entire day!! I think a Gohan/Videl story would be great! Oh and I was wondering, are you still updating your story website?
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: strawberry_router On: May 05, 2009 10:10 EDT
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I love love love this fic! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 12:41 EDT
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I'm sorry I haven't made anymore "completed" artwork for your story. I'm still very much in love with it though! I have a couple of sketches and concept art if you are interested ;) I just can't help but doodle something after I read your work! http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Works-in-Progress-120667142 and http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Free-My-Heart-IV-concept-art-121428123 I can't wait until I have some free time to finish one of these! :D
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 09:46 EDT
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Action packed adventure! I know I've said this before but I swear so far this is my favorite chapter. I just love how our two escapees interact with eachother and have to rely on one another for survival. It could be easier if they seperate but they refuse to leave the other's side. They just HAVE to be near each other. I just love it!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: May 03, 2009 11:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing escape scene!!!! What happened!! You're killing us here!! I love the way they trust each other.
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Title: ch10
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: May 03, 2009 06:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic, the way you have shown the development of their realationship is just amazing. The way you repreent the dynamics between them, they seem to be more in sync with one another, and I think in this chapter, when Vegeta had to travel acrosss the bridgepart with Bulma on his back, really demonstrated this. I am really enjoying this story and look forward to your updates
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: May 03, 2009 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely incredible. I love the chemistry between them. it makes me shiver just to think of it.. can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Gut-wrenching is all I can say. It was phenomenal and beautifully detailed. Can't wait for the next chapter. =D
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 03:39 EDT
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Loved it - update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 23:53 EDT
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oh wow, what a neat twist! i'm very curious to see what's going on with the ship! i love it. it's a unique and interesting plot :D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 23:29 EDT
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Interesting. I wonder what you have in store for us. It's good to see them out of the room and working together.
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: April 25, 2009 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooo addicted! This is an incredible story!
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