| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: tryniamerin On: March 24, 2009 10:48 EDT
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I'm curious to see how this will turn out! Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 05:39 EDT
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Nice to see you back to fandom. It´s beautifully written, but the end of the text reminds me Surviving Together, when Vegeta had to have sex with Bulma in front of Zarbon.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 22:32 EDT
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Something new!! I like it. Haven't read much on my favorite couple in a very long time. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are undoubtedly one of my favorite authors and I am thrilled that you decided to start another story. The beginning is wonderful and I can not wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 22, 2009 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost couldn't believe my hotmail, when it said you had another story!!!! This is absolutely a great start! I hate Zarbon and Keice already lol! Poor Vegeta...he always get the rough ends.
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Reviewed By: aquila333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 10:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice start here. it's original and well writian. no bad grammer or spelling mistakes. i can't wait for the next part of the story. what happens to our favorite couple? please don't wait too long to update!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta (jut not logged in) On: March 22, 2009 09:30 EDT
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Gods I love you girl! It looks like another start of another great fic...just like all the others..this one looks great and i can't wait for the next chap! Don't keep us waiting for too long!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: March 21, 2009 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved this first chapter! It left sooo much to be desired! I cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: sihnya On: March 21, 2009 10:26 EDT
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Interesting beginning, can't wait to read more !!!
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Reviewed By: irritatedreader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about losing hope, the first chapter is so hopeless it brings tears to my eyes. Vegeta's outlook is heartbreaking. I'm going to love Bulma. I know she's kickass. This sounds like it's going to be a really scary fic. A coincidence you updated. I read your Pitch Black fic for the thousandth time two days ago.
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Title: This is surreal
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 19:58 EDT
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I can't believe you are back! I know you said you were done with this fandom but to find out you changed your mind is great. An awesome start, and at the risk of sounding trite, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! I'm so happy that you're posting again, you just made my week!! I really enjoyed this first chapter and I think is successfully sets up the backbone of the story. I can't wait to read more so update soon!
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Title: oh~
Reviewed By: starbrella On: March 20, 2009 18:07 EDT
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wow this is a beginning of a good fic! i can't wait to read the rest, just as expected from you!!! please update this soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 17:43 EDT
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Wow what a plot! You definitely have quite the imaginiation and come up with the most exciting and interesting stories. Bravo! Bravo! I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 17:36 EDT
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About time you provide us with something new *smirks and growls low* Looking forward to what happens next...
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