| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt got to read the new chapters... ive in the middle of my exams lol, just finished one today and my last is next monday, and all the emails piled up LOL anyways black hair, tan skin, chocolate eyes.... and no one is demons etc etc in the story?? hmmmm what colour was Inuyasha's hair again?? im determined to work this out LOL and omg their going clubbing?? OMG i soo want to know what happened XD
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2009 14:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Clubs aren't always the best ideas. Too much tangible drama oozing all around. But, then, this story wouldn't be exciting without all that drama. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter.
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
one wonders why they didn't just let the answering machine get it... o.0 -- is he avoiding kagome's sister? ♥
|
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! I'm torn. I really, really want Inu to be WR, but I also, really REALLY don't. Because he and Kagome seem pretty serious...and I don't want Kikyo's heart broken. But OTOH, if he isn't WR, who is??? Now I'm craving pancakes! Gah! Can't wait for more, this fic always keeps me guessing ^^
|
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
shouldn't inuyasha know the she and kagome are sisters. they look just alike and I'm pretty sure kagome said that her sister that works in the cafe right. he should know are he the dumbest fool in the world.
|
Reviewed By: lanita On: October 08, 2009 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooo, thats a lesson learned. poor kagome... anyways, thanx as always for updating ^^
|
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, please make something happen next update, the story is grinding to a halt. I think we all know White Rose is Inuyasha - make it happen already....
|
Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: October 08, 2009 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahhh! We may be finally getting closer to the Inuyasha/White Rose mystery!!Dun dun dun!!! Can't wait ^^ Oooh, good luck with the wedding, hope you have a great day! Ack, and good luck with Bio, I had to get a tutor for that too when I did it! Btw, seeing how you've named a character 'White Rose' and all...you should check out Yoko from Yu Yu Hakusho...he is literally a 'White Rose'...you'll see what I mean! The fic I'm writing just now has him in it, maybe you could check it out when you have the time ;) Its a IY X YYH cross mind you :P Can't wait for update, but will wait patiently!
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i would have assumed that she would have met him at their holiday party--new years? so guy could very well be inuyasha-- won't that be a kick in the head! *starts singing dean martin youtube.com/watch?v=huKSm0tAvhs ♥;
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo, new update! And some of the drama's been resolved too! Thanks again for a great chapter (I know, not much else to say).
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahh-- finally getting 'a round tuit'-- reading/catching up (laying flooring, baseboards, and trim)-- sorry! ♣ wow, stuff really happened. bad kagome and inuyasha!! doing stuff like that... ♠ so-- sephiroth/white haired guy hasn't been identified yet. =p am i to assume that the lemon (that i won't be reading) will all be in our 'reality challenged' sister's head? or are you giving her a real one? ♦ just ignore me, it's late and my joints ache. good stuff though. ♥
|
Reviewed By: lanita On: October 06, 2009 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was a horrible place to leave us hanging!! but thanx for updating, i love reading this story.
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki so i bursts into laughter when i read 'We had sex' and the 'i-i dont remember!' Oo god that killed me XD hmmm can we know what hair WR has or do we already know?? OOo i hope i didnt missed it >.> anyways about the teachers thing i know what you mean... like i only have 1 more week of holidays then im back to school, 2 weeks of revision and then our exams, but who the hell gives us a freaking test on the holidays?! BAHHHH!! oops sorry about that lol good luck with it =D
|
Reviewed By: lanita On: September 23, 2009 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the opening!! hehe thanx as always for updating!
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 11:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooo goodness, all these new developments! Drama really is the best category. Excitement! Romance! Sadness! Everything under one big soap opera of a boat. Anyway, thanks for the new chapter!
|
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
