| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 23, 2009 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Oh no nononononono!! Kagome, you silly girl! How can you not remember! Eeeeks, this is getting more messy by the minute...but I love it!! ^^ Don't worry, college stuff can get demanding, just take your time, it's more important ^^
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 03:36 CDT
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OMG... Inu with short black hair.. no tell me it is not true... NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Well does that mean he can not possibly be the WR? huh? Is there some sort of twist?
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 13:04 CDT
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I kinda really expected this, but it's still heart-wrenching to see. This is sad. By the way, how does college seem to you? Normal college or community? I'm going to community so that I can transfer to a (rather prestigious) four-year college after two years, but I'm kinda curious to see what it may be like for someone going right to four-year. Like living in a dorm. Poll: I think that would actually be kind of called for. After all, Kikyo is the main character of this story and a lemon I don't think will be too strange. If you think it's appropriate, then go for it. :D Thanks again for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 02:17 CDT
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wow.... lots of chapters posted so close together... you will spoil me. Why is Kaggie so upset with her taking medication? I am still wondering whom this WR is. Part of me thinks it could possibly be Inu but then part of me thinks it can't be. ARGH... I look forward to reading the chapters coming up.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! hide pills hide!! Oooo Kikyo is screwed now.. and well i like this Kikyo so do a lemon ^_____^ and i see why its your fav =P
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 20, 2009 19:56 CDT
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a lemon with who? i hope itd be with the white rose!! thanx for updating ^^
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Reviewed By: Kawaiikekechan NLI On: September 20, 2009 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big UHOH! Wonder how Kikyo's going to react??? And yes, Kikyo lemon please :P Ive been up for 20 hours so sorry, this review is short! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 15:09 CDT
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=P i was only kidding about sephiroth, thought it'd give you a laugh =P ♣ i figured it was naraku when you said that onigumo looked just like joe/bob. ♦ when my husband was diagnosed with paranoia with schizoid tendencies and a few other things-- we discussed it and decided that it would be best to tell everyone we knew--to show we weren't ashamed of him or of his being 'reality challenged' (i made up that politically correct term). the only way to dispel the stigma of mental illness is for people to go public with their disorders! -- and for people to deal with mental illness in a rational and fair way- you're doing that with this story ;) ♥
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 13:07 CDT
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I think your subtle hints are turning up-in-yo-face. Quite frankly, though, I'm fine as long as I find out who everyone is and what's going to happen and what Kikyo regrets and ohmigod I need to know. Oh well, at least one mystery was solved with Naraku. I actually expected that, but still, it's nice to know. Thanks for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 19, 2009 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I feel like some major disaster is going to happen (cliff hangers kill me)!! still love the story though ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 05:55 CDT
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i know-- he's sephiroth from ff7! ♣ she could call him and just tell him the truth, she was worried about her sister and she wanted to check on her sooner than later. tell him she left when it wasn't too bad and she already figured she would be spending the night and she's sorry she broke her promise but she was really distressed about her sister. -- he may be mad but he'll get over it, family is important. ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got to look out for me?? well that isnt nice LOL wait does Inuyasha have white hair in this fanfic?? hmmm got me thinking again lol and that regret... i wonder if Kagome is going to learn that Kikyo is seeing things, or maybe Kikyo might break... OOoo god im soo excited XD
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 21:40 CDT
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Yay, I kept up with it this time! In any case, I most certainly am enjoying these 3 chapters, thank you very much (no really, thank you). And I know what you mean by wanting to get to the exciting part, but you still need to get through all the small stuff before that. Hateful. Anyway, thank you again and wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 18, 2009 19:13 CDT
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love the story! thanx for continuing it. also i love you disclamer ^^
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 18, 2009 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh! Alarm bells are a ringing!!! Can't wait to see what she means by that little line! What a cliffy! ^^ Great work as always, can't wait for the next chap!!
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