|
| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: PhoPoe On: September 17, 2009 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
"White Rose" is Inuyasha, I can just taste it... uck, I'm so not looking forward to that. And Kagome, being the self-sacrificing girl that she is, will back off and let her sister have him.
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, Hampton really has gotten to me! Thought I was checking this daily, but find two chapters when I check it again! Mind you, that's not a bad thing. Two chapters at once is actually kinda thrilling. It's interesting to see how everyone's lives move on while Kikyo's is so central to Joe/Bob, the shop, and her White Rose (she mentions that herself, silly me).
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
sounds like she's a bit envious of her sister's happiness. you're still holding out on the identity of her 'white rose' and i'm really curious about him. ♥
| Title: chapter 28
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
we're laying the floor and i feel like i've been beat up-- taking a break. ♣ i take it that the party didn't go too bad for her. i'm thinking that kagome probably doesn't know that her sister is on meds and having mental/emotional problems? i know more people who are on antidepressants and a few on antipsychotics- it's better people know, not only for support but just in case something happens... ♥
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: September 17, 2009 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soaking up the sun, while ive been soaking up the rain?? thats not fair lol anyways, seen that you havent brought up Sota, i was starting to think that you made him grown up and made him WR, but then again he really doesnt have any white to begin with... maybe its Sesshy or even his dad.... LOL awww its killing me!!!
| Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
MMMM...I know where this is going...
| Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 16, 2009 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Didn't expect another update so soon! Woot, super exciting about the move in scene then ^^Poor Kikyo, I know someone in her kinda situation- the younger sis getting all the glory. Oh I know, this summer has been so busy! I meant to get so much writing done and i didn't! That's ok, I thrive on the waiting ^^ And I will wait! Oh, super congrats for your nominations, you deserved it! Can't wait for the next chappy as always!
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woot! An update! Don't worry, sluggish updates is expected at this time of year, what with all the stuff going on (I myself am swamped with work, classes, and homework). But it's nice to see this updated! By the way, the suspense is killing me. And goddangit, when is Kikyo gonna meet Inuyasha? With the intensity of their meeting that you're giving us, I'm beginning to suspect White Rose really is Inuyasha. Hmmmmm... Thanks again for your wonderful story!
| Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 15, 2009 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shucks, and I thought we finally going to see Inu! I'm convinced now he is WR, but hey, I'm maybe just hoping for more drama (I'm a total junkie for it hehe). Lovely to see an update on this fic, I missed it! Good luck with the next chappy, keep up the great work ^^ (and for once, I didn't feel hungry, because I actually had chocolate cake before I read this fic! Freaky :P)
| Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow did not expect it to go in that direction... I am really curious to see what is gonna happen next. Sorry I was a bit behind and had to read the last few chapters all at once.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know...I've been thinking this for a while now, but I'm REALLY beginning to think it. I think...*whispers* white rose is Inuyasha! Listen, I can't beleive how much you update every day! Even if the chapters are short, it must take it out on you! Don't worry, I'll be waiting patiently for whenever you choose to update! Take your time, and don't exhuast yourself! Enjoy your summer! Meh, I hate power cuts! Loved this chappy, as all the others! And chocolate cake...mmm. I'm just about to go out for dinner, and you know, if there's chocolate cake, I'm soooo having it! (You can tell I've totally not got a sweet tooth, right? :P) I'm glad Kikyo on medication- hopefully that will help her pull through! But if white rose is really who I think he is....eeeks! *meltdown!* Just wanted to comment on Lydia's review: Yes, maybe this Kikyo is more sympathetic and such. However, this story isn't cannon- it's AU, seeing how Kagome and Kikyo are sisters, Kikyo isn't dead, etc. So i think Kikyo can be portrayed however the author wants her to be ^^ Okay, that's my rant for today! ^^ Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
take as much time as you need, we will be all here waiting ^____^ and i wonder how Kikyo will act when she goes and meets the 'couples'... and hmm an A?? hmmm trying to think here... you didnt use Bankotsu, have you?? the hell your using Hakudoshi lol wait you going by the anime or the manga??
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
she couldn't just say--'i'm not up to crowds right now, how about we meet over coffee or dinner or something?' i'm sure her sis would be agreeable. ♣ well, you can update less often, i'm sure we'll live with less frequent chapters-- just don't forget!! ~♥~
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. Well that explains a lot!! Poor Kikyo. I wonder what happens now? And this party. Hmm. I've had bad and good experiences at new year parties, so I have a feeling something hellava big is going to happen!! Wahhh! If it's white chocolate chip, I may pass out :P But I really need to try out those recipies, i'll let you know how I get on hehe! No white rose in this chapter! Aww. Hopefully we'll be seeing him soon! Of course I'll keep sending you the good vibes ^^ This review isn't going to be as long- just heard the news about Michael Jackson, I'm in deep shock! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan p.s. thanks for taking the time to email your reply ^^
| Title: I don't write a lot of reviews. I'm lazy :P
Reviewed By: Lidia On: June 25, 2009 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually do Kikyo stories. I don't hate Kikyo, I just don't like her. That whole wandering around stealing souls and talking to yourself for five episodes out of the season sort of bores me to tears. So naturally I find her character pretty irritating. I have tried to give Kikyo stories a try. They usually suck. This one is actually good. Not my favorite story but I'm surprised I've read this much considering when I read Kikyo's name I tend to shy away from reading at all. But a good story is a good story and you have one. Be proud. I actually find that Kagome's kind of a selfish bitch in this story. In that last chapter when she asks what happened. Let's wait until Inuyasha and she get married. Then let a couple of thugs beat him to death, leave her with nothing, and see how many parties she wants to go out to. The Kikyo you write is too lenient and forgiving with her. But I guess that's a change from the usual bitchy Kikyo. :P
| | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
|
|
