| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...some more puzzle pieces. LOL I have a few ideas about what might have happened between the sisters. One of the interesting things about this story so far is since we don't know who the characters are for sure yet we don't load them up with preconceived ideas based on the characters in series. Anyway...looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad as it is... i get the feeling its Sango, Kagome is the sister and Miroku is thw writer.. though i dont know who would be Sango's ex husband... i could never see Sango and Koga.. but im always usually wrong lol :P but Ooo god how long are you going to make us suffer?? lol
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the format you are using...the short chapters are like little flashes of memory...the pieces of the puzzle. I'm really wondering what happened between the sisters. I hadn't noticed too many tense problems but there were a couple times I got mixed up with the pronouns. I had to reread a couple of passages...I know it's really hard without any names tho. Awesome writing!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo i like ^____^ killing me trying to figure out whos who XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
well joe-bob, it's an interesting little mystery of who's who. ♥
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intriguing. Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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