| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: lanita On: September 19, 2009 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I feel like some major disaster is going to happen (cliff hangers kill me)!! still love the story though ^^
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 05:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know-- he's sephiroth from ff7! ♣ she could call him and just tell him the truth, she was worried about her sister and she wanted to check on her sooner than later. tell him she left when it wasn't too bad and she already figured she would be spending the night and she's sorry she broke her promise but she was really distressed about her sister. -- he may be mad but he'll get over it, family is important. ♥
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got to look out for me?? well that isnt nice LOL wait does Inuyasha have white hair in this fanfic?? hmmm got me thinking again lol and that regret... i wonder if Kagome is going to learn that Kikyo is seeing things, or maybe Kikyo might break... OOoo god im soo excited XD
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, I kept up with it this time! In any case, I most certainly am enjoying these 3 chapters, thank you very much (no really, thank you). And I know what you mean by wanting to get to the exciting part, but you still need to get through all the small stuff before that. Hateful. Anyway, thank you again and wonderful chapter!
|
Reviewed By: lanita On: September 18, 2009 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the story! thanx for continuing it. also i love you disclamer ^^
|
Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 18, 2009 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh! Alarm bells are a ringing!!! Can't wait to see what she means by that little line! What a cliffy! ^^ Great work as always, can't wait for the next chap!!
|
Reviewed By: PhoPoe On: September 17, 2009 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
"White Rose" is Inuyasha, I can just taste it... uck, I'm so not looking forward to that. And Kagome, being the self-sacrificing girl that she is, will back off and let her sister have him.
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, Hampton really has gotten to me! Thought I was checking this daily, but find two chapters when I check it again! Mind you, that's not a bad thing. Two chapters at once is actually kinda thrilling. It's interesting to see how everyone's lives move on while Kikyo's is so central to Joe/Bob, the shop, and her White Rose (she mentions that herself, silly me).
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
sounds like she's a bit envious of her sister's happiness. you're still holding out on the identity of her 'white rose' and i'm really curious about him. ♥
|
Title: chapter 28
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
we're laying the floor and i feel like i've been beat up-- taking a break. ♣ i take it that the party didn't go too bad for her. i'm thinking that kagome probably doesn't know that her sister is on meds and having mental/emotional problems? i know more people who are on antidepressants and a few on antipsychotics- it's better people know, not only for support but just in case something happens... ♥
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: September 17, 2009 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soaking up the sun, while ive been soaking up the rain?? thats not fair lol anyways, seen that you havent brought up Sota, i was starting to think that you made him grown up and made him WR, but then again he really doesnt have any white to begin with... maybe its Sesshy or even his dad.... LOL awww its killing me!!!
|
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
MMMM...I know where this is going...
|
Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 16, 2009 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Didn't expect another update so soon! Woot, super exciting about the move in scene then ^^Poor Kikyo, I know someone in her kinda situation- the younger sis getting all the glory. Oh I know, this summer has been so busy! I meant to get so much writing done and i didn't! That's ok, I thrive on the waiting ^^ And I will wait! Oh, super congrats for your nominations, you deserved it! Can't wait for the next chappy as always!
|
Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woot! An update! Don't worry, sluggish updates is expected at this time of year, what with all the stuff going on (I myself am swamped with work, classes, and homework). But it's nice to see this updated! By the way, the suspense is killing me. And goddangit, when is Kikyo gonna meet Inuyasha? With the intensity of their meeting that you're giving us, I'm beginning to suspect White Rose really is Inuyasha. Hmmmmm... Thanks again for your wonderful story!
|
Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 15, 2009 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shucks, and I thought we finally going to see Inu! I'm convinced now he is WR, but hey, I'm maybe just hoping for more drama (I'm a total junkie for it hehe). Lovely to see an update on this fic, I missed it! Good luck with the next chappy, keep up the great work ^^ (and for once, I didn't feel hungry, because I actually had chocolate cake before I read this fic! Freaky :P)
|
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
