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| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 21:19 CDT
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she couldn't just say--'i'm not up to crowds right now, how about we meet over coffee or dinner or something?' i'm sure her sis would be agreeable. ♣ well, you can update less often, i'm sure we'll live with less frequent chapters-- just don't forget!! ~♥~
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. Well that explains a lot!! Poor Kikyo. I wonder what happens now? And this party. Hmm. I've had bad and good experiences at new year parties, so I have a feeling something hellava big is going to happen!! Wahhh! If it's white chocolate chip, I may pass out :P But I really need to try out those recipies, i'll let you know how I get on hehe! No white rose in this chapter! Aww. Hopefully we'll be seeing him soon! Of course I'll keep sending you the good vibes ^^ This review isn't going to be as long- just heard the news about Michael Jackson, I'm in deep shock! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan p.s. thanks for taking the time to email your reply ^^
| Title: I don't write a lot of reviews. I'm lazy :P
Reviewed By: Lidia On: June 25, 2009 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually do Kikyo stories. I don't hate Kikyo, I just don't like her. That whole wandering around stealing souls and talking to yourself for five episodes out of the season sort of bores me to tears. So naturally I find her character pretty irritating. I have tried to give Kikyo stories a try. They usually suck. This one is actually good. Not my favorite story but I'm surprised I've read this much considering when I read Kikyo's name I tend to shy away from reading at all. But a good story is a good story and you have one. Be proud. I actually find that Kagome's kind of a selfish bitch in this story. In that last chapter when she asks what happened. Let's wait until Inuyasha and she get married. Then let a couple of thugs beat him to death, leave her with nothing, and see how many parties she wants to go out to. The Kikyo you write is too lenient and forgiving with her. But I guess that's a change from the usual bitchy Kikyo. :P
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 17:47 CDT
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medication only does so much, takes the edge off, makes one like a zombie- especially the anti-psychotic meds, then once you get used to the effect they up the dosage. well, if she can't, she can't-- no use in overstressing her already precarious hold on reality. -- she really should tell her sister, mental illness has less stigma when people are open and honest about it. there is nothing to be ashamed about. ♥
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 16:36 CDT
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Thank you for responding! Sorry if I came off rude or ill mannered at first, but I was trying to demonstrate how your story pulled me in even though I didn't think I'd like it. But, anyway, gosh dang the story's getting really interesting now! I am itching to see how Onigumo responds to all this. Itching!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like my friend is away coz shes seeing things but nothing what Kikyo is.. anyways i ccant get to see Wicked.. stupid parents lol im tyring to go through the names in my head, but i dont know how you will choose for White Rose lol but sticking with Sesshomaru =P
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 20:13 CDT
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i prefer the term 'reality challenged'. ♣ one hopes the guy can help her-- or explain why she's ready to be shipped off to the funny farm. ♥
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update!! You spoil us, you really do. And make me feel guilty, seeing how i haven't updated in a month (you do it the smart way though! I spend a month writing a chapter thats about 8000 words long. Sooo much harder to edit and get up ^.^;) Well, I'm really glad I read this fic, you really have opened my eyes to Kikyo! I'm pretty much a neutral too, its just rare to see Kikyo in a good light in fanfiction (and if she is, she's always major OC!) Oh don't worry, I will definitely be sticking around! And omg, sticky buns? Yeah, I'm gonna have to start eating sugar while I read your updates! ^^ It's 1.14 am and I'm now craving buttermilk cake! (my tummy actual just rummbled there :P) Well, I'll keep sending you the good vibes, and hoping your dad gets better. I know how it feels a little, my dad had surgery due to problems with his back, and he couldn't move for 6 months. It's not a nice thing to experience your parent being like that! So, to the chappy! Onigumo...wow, really hope he can help Kikyo! And it's interesting how the white rose and Joe have merged. I think Joe is Naraku, so its pretty interesting how Onigumi could be the key to helping her stop seeing her dead husband, seeing how they are linked in the manga. And poor white rose! He seems startled by Kikyo's presence! I think he has a little crush :P And the imagined white rose is so possessive, its so cute! Okay, I'm really rambling now (usually my reviews are along the lines of, 'loved it! can't wait for update', so I don't know what's gotten into me!) You don't have to reply to this online musing, I think I'm delerious with hunger for cakes you are describing! :P If Kikyo ever makes cookies I *will* be licking the screen! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x p.s must try that muffin recipe soon! XD
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, at first I saw this story and dismissed it completely. An American setting, a kinda creepy stalker-like premise, first person perspective (just my personal pet peeve). But then I started reading it and I found myself really enjoying the story. Really enjoying the story. The way you've brought the story out is ingeniously interesting and enjoyably different. Thank you for the story! :)
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know its funny that this story is kinda hitting home at the moment.. lol anyways i wanted to go to Wicked.. *growls to self* .... *eye twitches* i need to know who White Rose is! its killing me lol and so Kikyo is 'seeing' her White Rose and 'seeing' Naraku right??
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mouth is watering for a cup cake and its 10am ^^ Loved the update! I really can't wait to see if Kikyo can be fixed! Aww, I'm sorry to hear you're having rough time. *Good vibes* heading your way! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x p.s. i liked AR posted at the end of the chapter ^^
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 00:40 CDT
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yeah, when my ex was abusing me~ i told no one. (he's dead now) --not good to live in secret. ♥
| Title: Craving muffins!
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that's it so far?? I've been sitting reading this all night, gobbling it up like Kikyo's blueberry muffins! I have to say, what you did with this fic was very clever. I'm not so much a Kikyo hater (I just find her easy to play the baddy when i write!) and I would never have looked at this fic if you had stated outright it was a Kikyo fic. So great job with that, because I would have kicked myself if I had missed this gem! You have great writing talent- your story flows so naturally, the characters emotions and feelings interlink with the plot so beautifully, it's like a detailed and perfect weave in a scarf. I really hope Kikyo and the white rose get together! I can't wait for the next update! Glad to hear your dad's surgery went well, and hope everything is going ok in real life! There's nothing worse when readers forget the author has a life outside their story! ^^ Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 12:03 CDT
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i'm sorry, i really am. i was thinking (after i read someone's review)- remember when kikyou was reanimated in canon?-- well her 'joe/bob' was reanimated-- and then i couldn't stop laughing-- i don't know why i found that so funny (i guess maybe something about 'turnabout is fair play'?) and i am sorry. i need help too! ♣ so happy she's seeking help- the first step to getting well is admitting you have a problem. ~&hearts~
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hang on... is "Joe" her White Rose? or is she seeing him... O.o aghhh im confused..
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