| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitches* YOUR MOVING IT!?!?!??!?!?! WHY!!!!!i demand a answer!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking it so far! I've only gotten up to chapter 4, but your writing style is simply beautiful. Excuse me for asking, but are you a professional writer of any sort? It really seems like it from your usage of grammar and vocabulary. And the character (Kagome, I'm assuming for right now) seems so well thought out. I can actually feel her pain through your words. So far, an A+!
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Title: Huh...wha..?
Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 20:33 CDT
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What is Word Press? Why are you going to move this? Why are you doing this to me? You update and then threaten to take this away?? Not fair! I love this story and I need to find out who white Rose is. So can I please have your password thingy so I can find out what this Word Press is,pretty please. Or you can just stay here...
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2009 22:50 CDT
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aww, the last chapter is so sad!! I really didn't see it turning out like that!! But I hope it all works out. Glad to hear your dad is doing better!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2009 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this now that I have finished screaming..and i work in insurance so yeah ...quite a feat..... I'm tearing up at how the last chapter ended... I enjoy your story ..well written indeed..I was actually poking around here because it's been awhile since i've updated my own flic and a stumbled across you..happy i did !
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that your dad's surgery went well, that's good. And it's understandable that you would want to stay with him as much as possible, so the long-ish wait was fine. Awesome! Graduation! XD! Lol. Sorry. Couldn't help the enthusiasm. Awesome update by the way, (*I thought I should add that when I'm writing a review for a story. It's a good idea don't you think? Lol*) and i honestly can't wait for the next update, but it's still understandable if you want to spend time with your dad and don't update for a while, I won't hold that against you. But as for the rest of your reviewers . . .if they DO hold it against you just tell them to come talk to me and I'll sick Demon Inu on them. He hasn't been out for a while and he's looking for someone to eat (*figuratively speaking. Lol*) so he'll have some fun with that. I'm gonna stop rambling now before you tell me that I should stop talking because I'm starting to be a bother. Update when you can!!! XD ~~~HT630! (*P.S: I know I haven't posted any reviews for this story and I feel kinda bad about that, so I'm just telling you now that it's and awesome story all around. Thanks for adding it!*)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 19:12 CDT
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quintessentially the absolutely best love song! youtube.com/watch?v=Gaid72fqzNE ♦ enjoy!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 19:09 CDT
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maybe an older man... ♣ one who is grieving can't transfer feelings of love (that still linger after their loved one's death) to someone she doesn't know-- that's just unreasonable and creepy. maybe now she can clear her head and look at someone who she can really talk to. ♥;
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 18:21 CDT
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*bursts into laughter* That was rich! oh...the woes of things not going as you want them. Now if Mr. Simon had not done anything....
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bursts into laughter* "Want me to put your clothes in the dryer?" Oooo thats great! i cracked up laughing LOL and good luck for ya dad =)
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you changed it. I think it made it a lot simpler to understand, great job!!! Oh and I do hope things get better with your family. Dad having heart surgery does not sound too fun...
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 00:11 CDT
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HE HE HE HE HE HE HE HE HE
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic. Beautifully written. I was worried at first because I thought it might be a Kag/Sess fic which I generally steer clear of. (I tell one of my friends who prefers them that they'll rot her brain. But I'm just kidding)Anyway, this concept is orginal and interesting you had me talking to myself,(something that worries my roomate) I can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 19:25 CDT
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*blush* kyaah! oh gods that would be so embarassing to say :D Very nice chappie indeed. I thank you deeply for taking the time to write us an update. Yay update! The rain, the smells, the strong wafting senct of coffee is definitely a great visual!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 19:04 CDT
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ah, it's been pouring here too. ♣ i wanna knooww!! i'm gonna whine. =P ♥;
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