| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Title: Craving muffins!
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that's it so far?? I've been sitting reading this all night, gobbling it up like Kikyo's blueberry muffins! I have to say, what you did with this fic was very clever. I'm not so much a Kikyo hater (I just find her easy to play the baddy when i write!) and I would never have looked at this fic if you had stated outright it was a Kikyo fic. So great job with that, because I would have kicked myself if I had missed this gem! You have great writing talent- your story flows so naturally, the characters emotions and feelings interlink with the plot so beautifully, it's like a detailed and perfect weave in a scarf. I really hope Kikyo and the white rose get together! I can't wait for the next update! Glad to hear your dad's surgery went well, and hope everything is going ok in real life! There's nothing worse when readers forget the author has a life outside their story! ^^ Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 12:03 CDT
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i'm sorry, i really am. i was thinking (after i read someone's review)- remember when kikyou was reanimated in canon?-- well her 'joe/bob' was reanimated-- and then i couldn't stop laughing-- i don't know why i found that so funny (i guess maybe something about 'turnabout is fair play'?) and i am sorry. i need help too! ♣ so happy she's seeking help- the first step to getting well is admitting you have a problem. ~&hearts~
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hang on... is "Joe" her White Rose? or is she seeing him... O.o aghhh im confused..
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 15:17 CDT
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O.O Now that! I did not see. So the guy isn't dead?! .....*teeter teeter* OH MY!!!!! Is he a zombie?! or a mirage?! Dun Dun Dun!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 15:16 CDT
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yep-- crackers! ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 14:54 CDT
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youtube.com/watch?v=32X8sFAlDZM ♣ youtube.com/watch?v=EZyFcJcZiaU ♠ i guess i'm really dating myself with these...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 14:41 CDT
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Oh, dating sites O.O. Somehow I can't really imagine Kikyo using one, unless someone like Kagome forced her. Nice Work. Great chappies! However the suspense is killing. :D the type of dun dun dun! suspense, it's great.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki first of all, im on http://whiterose2009.wordpress.com/..... could i get the password?? and oki so thats killed some names of the list... but who the hell is it!?! its freaking killing me... god whos bloody hell left lol still have the feeling that its Sesshomaru, please dont let it be one of the band of seven XD but hmmm maybe its Ginta.... or it could be a old guy like Myouga LOL anyways cant to read more
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 20:51 CDT
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*memorex commercial*-- commercial!! ♣ my brain is going just as fast as kikyou's.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 20:49 CDT
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there was an old 'memorex' cassette that asked, "is it real or is it memorex?"... ♣ i'm wondering if this is only going to feed her delusions or help them. i guess he couldn't stay away from her pastries. *snicker* ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 12:56 CDT
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"i'm sorry, you just remind me too much like my dead fiance-- it would be too uncomfortable for me to see you again." --*backs away* that would be just too weird. ♠ one wonders why she has such an obsession with someone whose only communication with her is a coffee/pastry order and whether he will stay or have it to go. this is much more than a crush-- men in white jackets time! youtube.com/watch?v=0IT2ZjdKOtM -♠- youtube.com/watch?v=yU_JyGBDeIc -♦- youtube.com/watch?v=5m138-Fn5Tw -♣- yeah, i got carried away. sorry but kagome's big sis needs a little help. ♥;
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Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Do you want me to put your clothes in the dryer?" Smooth move, Kikyo! Still great comedy, character development, and plot! Just PLEASE don't make White Rose gay! I didn't think it was possible to feel sorry for Kikyo, but apparently it is.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 00:53 CDT
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nice repartee-- woman should be on some anti-psychosis drugs if those delusions continue. maybe some grief counseling. ♥;
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 19:30 CDT
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Yay! New chappie! I can see that from here it can only get better :D Great job!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 13:58 CDT
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O.O ooh? what exactly happened to her? Nice quick chappie! Thanks for uploading!
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