| "Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: August 05, 2009 01:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So stooooooooked! Great chapter, can't wait for the next! Keep doing a wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: OoDarksouLoO [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 20:40 PDT
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yay an update! love it love it love it! it's really good and I can't wait to see what happens next! I mean, all of your stories are good haha Free my heart was amazing too, I read it straight in like 2 days, and Free my soul is getting quite interesting too. yeah I can't wait for more! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: July 30, 2009 01:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, AMAZING! I'm so excited for chapter 3! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 03:29 PDT
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*mouth agape and filled with burning questions* All I can say is OMG I'm addicted to this story like a drug already xD
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: July 29, 2009 02:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am hooked :D You're the best AU-writer out there!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 23:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I love what's going on.I know its only a few chapters in but I still feel everything that happened in the last story. I'm excited to see how they work things out.
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Reviewed By: still don't remember On: July 28, 2009 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As exciting as I hoped! I've been dying, since that sentence in the first chapter, why the ship got dangerous for her. Vegeta is perfect.
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 18:16 PDT
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Ohhhhh no... he would have gotten the thrashing of a lifetime from me. He got off way too easily, and stealing a kiss too? Nuh-uh. She's gotta make him pay up for leaving her like that. However, other than that little rant, I am very much looking forward to what comes next. :}
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Reviewed By: B. On: July 28, 2009 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooo!!! That was a brilliant chapter! Your writing is incredible as always. I'm sooo hooked to this story. Can't wait til chapter 3 :D
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Reviewed By: devnyx On: July 28, 2009 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the meeting. he's the best. i loved it. i wonder who else is out there and what bulma will find out. keep me updated misses.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: July 28, 2009 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD! The tension was excruciating!!! They love each other but Bulma is right. She shouldn't forgive him that easily. Even with the whole red cape wonder!
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Reviewed By: sugaboo On: July 28, 2009 11:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 11:03 PDT
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I loved that chapter!! (Chapter 2) It's so nice to see that he hadn't totally forgotten her and he still cares. Keep up the good work! I love it so far!
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 10:36 PDT
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Yay! So glad to see that you're continuing the story. Two chapters in and I already have a boat-load of questions! This is going to be another good one, I can tell!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 09:01 PDT
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It's good to see that Vegeta is still as enchanted by her as she is of him. You can tell that he's fighting himself very hard to keep calm around her, even when she's trying to push him away. It's getting more and more interesting, I wonder who else is there. I can't wait for more.
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