| "Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Xaverri On: September 03, 2009 10:12 PDT
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Very happy to see you keep updating! I don't see the need for you to take any extra classes in writing, you're already one of the best out there :) Although I must admit I found more errors in this chapter than before, is it possible you do not have a beta-reader at your disposal anymore? The story is developing nicely, knowing you it will take a long while before they come to terms with one another and the path towards it will be nothing but readers bliss :D I wonder if they find out beforehand the Nemekian balls hold more wishes? Oh how I wish for Vegeta to whisper in my ear just once, it always brings shivers to my spine! You portray him so well, sigh :) Goodluck with college and hope to see more of your fics updated soon! -X-
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Reviewed By: KB On: September 03, 2009 04:37 PDT
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Ahhhhh! *happily claps then waits for more*
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, is Vegeta sick? I am so glad you posted a squeal! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: annabella On: August 28, 2009 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update please???pretty please???
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Reviewed By: LehGehE On: August 25, 2009 20:58 PDT
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when are you updating?
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Title: My Bad
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2009 10:54 PDT
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I almost forgot about this story. I didn't even know you decided to write a sequel. I'm so happy that you are. I cam't wait to read more. Wow how they both have changed in a years time, but the passion hasn't and thats whats important.
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Reviewed By: anchyli On: August 18, 2009 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First thing I did when I came home from my holidays was going online to see if the sequel is here!!Imagine my happiness when I saw it and then only 3 chapters :( so please update soon!!Your stories are the best! Go Vegeta!!!
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Reviewed By: 123467 On: August 17, 2009 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH! God that woman SO INFURIATES ME! You know, Lyedra. I wished that even if there WAS something in her eyes, he wouldn't desire her Yeah, pretty much my very childish jealousy speaking for me. I so love Bulma and Vegeta, and I so love this story, I hope you continue very soon!
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Anonymous234 On: August 14, 2009 21:32 PDT
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r u updating anytime soon? last chapter was quite dissapointing
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 13, 2009 15:47 PDT
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YESS!!! Finally the sequel to the first part! I'm so glad it's finally posted up! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the way you wrote, the style of writing and the story your making right now. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: August 09, 2009 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You surprise me...again! I never thougt, they would meet so soon... Beautifully written. Bulmas suffering is heartbreaking. Although I love it, I hope you don't treat her to bad...:)) Thank you!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 09, 2009 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Cooler is going to become a problem. I knew this Lyedra was a power-whore. Once again this chapter was brilliant
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Reviewed By: janelynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo Cooler. It's getting suspenseful. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: vanilla22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: August 05, 2009 01:31 PDT
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WOOPS! I mean chapter 4 lol
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