| "Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 17:15 PDT
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Really good chapter. I'm a little worried about what Bulma was hiding from Vegeta when he took her top off. I mean, it's been a year since they've seen each other so it can't be that she pregnant with his child and that would only leave Goku (which is creepy). I'll trust your judgment though, you haven't let me down yet. I love the rivalry between Bulma and Lyedra, even though it's obvious who Vegeta is choosing (for the moment at least). And now he's walked off in a huff, leaving Bulma alone with the Dragon Balls. Even if he doesn't know that she knows where they exactly are, you'd think he'd at least know that she'd be smart enough to find them when left to her own devices. Hmm... Can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wanna see a cat fight between Bulma and the other chick. That would be awesome, lol. Except Bulma's human and would get her ass kicked. :( Overall, I really like this chapter, except for it being so short. :( But I'm willing to be forgiving because its the school year and I'm in school too. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 02:41 PDT
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Hawthawthawt :D Bulma's such a bitch haha, I could feel the tension between her and Leydra all the way here in Holland :P I wonder if she can betray him now, but I have a feeling she has no choice... So much drama incoming! Love it, love it, keep updating! -X-averri
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Reviewed By: christy always reviews On: October 13, 2009 23:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating. I can't breathe for how villainous Vegeta is. Everything seems so impossible. I'm loving this.
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 20:09 PDT
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oohaha, i think someone's hiding something...or rather someone from his daddy. as always, i was so happy to see that you updated and was not disappointed by this excellent chapter! i'm really excited to see the direction that this is taking and can't wait to see what wonderful challenges you throw in our favorite couple's way!
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Reviewed By: pleasee On: October 12, 2009 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh please update soon!!!! I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 07, 2009 19:03 PDT
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Kyah! They finally are together (for now) again! i can't wait for the next chapter. Since the dragon balls can only make one wish, i wonder who's going to end up having the wish :) i can't wait to see where this is going. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that it is wonderful that you are taking writing classes to improve your already perfect writing skills. Wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: not a member On: September 05, 2009 01:01 PDT
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good cliffhanger...lol. but great story, the prequel to this one was very good as well.
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Reviewed By: HEll Ya On: September 03, 2009 20:29 PDT
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I likey alot!! too bad its not on your top priority to update sooner!! Your chapters make my months!! lol.. Keep up the excitement.
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Reviewed By: anchyli On: September 03, 2009 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yess an update!!and I loved it, especially the cold/warm thing and the last lines.Bulma is about to give in but I have a feeling the Barbie doll bitch is going to interupt ;) my classes are starting on monday too so I sympathize with you, I only wish I had classes that entertaining as yours hehe :) good luck and don't abandon us, we will be patient, your stories are worth the wait :)
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 15:38 PDT
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I love the last line!! Good Luck with your classes. Hope to see more of this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: i've revewed every chapter On: September 03, 2009 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such tension! The thought of a dark vicious Vegeta being so dangerously sweet for Bulma makes me swoon. Oh please, Bulma, give into him.
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Reviewed By: sugaboo On: September 03, 2009 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! It stinks that the updates are slow, but I understand the family and school thing. Good luck with classes and keep up the good work on this story!
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 12:34 PDT
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you are my favorite b/v writer, hands down. this story is turning out to be really interesting and fixation is, well, fixating, haha. good luck with your classes! i know how hard and time consuming they can be. so long as you don't abandon your stories, i won't complain if they're updated less often :P still, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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