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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 17:01 PDT
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Oh my gosh yes please do write a third part this story is too good to end there. And yeah I don't blame Bulma for being a little freaked out with Vegeta's onslaught of 'I know you more than you could ever imagine' stuff. Even though you mentioned that her and Yamcha broke up I really want to see how Vegeta would react to seeing her together with Yamcha, being torn between him wanting to be the only one with her and not wanting to see her upset. I'm also glad you're planning on working more with fixation. That's a very compelling storyline in a completely different way and it's absolutely wonderful. Great job with this story and good luck with Fixation (and hopefully a third part ;p)
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Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: May 27, 2010 16:33 PDT
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OMG!!! you HAVE to write a sequal!!! you just have to!! I'll make sure to read ur new one-shot on thursday too...I LOVE YOUR WORK!! please don't stop writing V/B fanfics ..there are not a lot of good writers left and now there are fewer and fewer stories being published.. oh and i wanted to ask you if you have any favorite B/V fanfics?
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Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF is right omg you can't do this to me :( you can't end it like this. I loved this last chapter but it's been two stories waiting for them to end up together then BAM "the end" and they aren't together. Ok enough of my whining, this was truly an amazing series. I can't remember if I reviewed before but if there's another I'll definitely do so every chapter. Beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: Khamilla On: May 24, 2010 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im so excited about this story right now! i descovered your geocities site a few years ago and fell in love with all your stories and read them all over and over. Your definatly my favorite fanfic writer, im so happy youre still writing you always get vegie and bulma exactly how i imagine them in my mind!. update soon please :D
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Title: Frederikke
Reviewed By: Flyrisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2010 14:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! By far the best characterization of Vegeta you have ever done...Still, as I greedily devoured this chapter I couldn't help feeling a bit concerned now towards Vegeta's character. Him saying at the end how he will make Bulma his own and create his perfect world, regardless of what she thinks...I just really hope that won't happen in the litteral sense...give Bulma time to come together again with Vegeta properly. Kill me if you will, cause I know you have the story planned out, but I feel it is precisely those little thoughts and actions of "affection" that Vegeta displays in these stories that makes his character and your writing him so much better!! that is why I personally think and hope that he will step up to the plate in the end and he will see the importance of caring for ALL of Bulma's needs,(something I think that has never really happened yet) and understanding that emotions are essential for humans and she could never do without. Lastly...Of course I don't really know if you ever meant to write Vegeta differently, but to me I noticed a differnce right away, and it is the BEST writing anyone has ever done for him, and you have outdone yourself!!! Just please I hope you'll make sure the ending doesn't end with Bulma being his property and then she isn't but then she is...because knowing you I know you can find a way to give them both everything. And don't be concerned if Vegeta's character will be ruined, IT WON'T, not the way you're writing him now. Just make sure that for once Bulma will truly know that Vegeta knows how lucky he is to have her. Best of wishes to you and your family!!
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Reviewed By: Miaka-chanFF On: May 23, 2010 10:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeee. This is one of the first stories of your I've read that hasn't been completed. I'm still in love. I eagerly await the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: B. On: May 21, 2010 20:07 PDT
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Oh man, awesome. How will Vegeta get Bulma to fall for him again? Exciting, can't wait for more :D
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Reviewed By: blue crystal On: May 20, 2010 23:02 PDT
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IM SPEECHLESS....! no literally i was for at least a min.lol! It was so unpredictable, so original, so mind-boggling. You have gifts, writing, creativity and unexplainable imagination! hope you will post the next chapter soon, so i can become utterly speechless AGAIN :) YAYAYAY
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 19:21 PDT
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Wow, haven't had a chance to review in awhile but I'm glad that you're sticking with this fic. I'll be honest, it got a little odd there for a bit but it was original and new, very befitting of au storytelling ways. So now that Vegeta's made the wish to return I have to wonder what will be different about the cell chapters and how it will be for Vegeta knowing that she hated him while he was longing for her. I Can't wait to see where you take it.
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Reviewed By: B. On: May 19, 2010 17:13 PDT
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Omg what a twist, i thought u might have made bulma make her wish, but this is was unexpected. I underestimated you. I can't wait to find out more and learn about this promise between them
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Reviewed By: LilySama On: May 16, 2010 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whooa! didn't see that one coming! literally and figuratively! poor Bulma :( but they got the Dragon balls, right? right??? I've got a feeling this was all Lyedra doing, looking forward seeing her dead by the vengeful hand of Vegeta (who will finally understand what really feels to be without Bulma, right :)) looking forward to next Thursday, now my favorite day of the week :)
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Reviewed By: taixi On: May 09, 2010 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story (and the prequel) and it was such a pleasant surprise to see an update (actually, at least 2 new chapters since I last saw an update). Yeah, it's always best to take what your teachers tell you with a grain of salt. They're just people too, and thus, might not put you on the best path for you. Just try and take as much as you can from it! What an agonizing choice for Bulma - restore her world and give up her child, or keep her child to be raised in an unfriendly universe? I think I know what she's going to pick (after all, if she restores Earth there's always the slim *chance* that she will still have Bunny...but no chance of restoring Earth if she chooses not to go back in time. I hope Vegeta keeps at least some of his memories of that time as well - the moments between them in captivity were so perfect)
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Reviewed By: Anica On: May 03, 2010 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a sight for sore eyes - an update from you!!! I've been coming here everyday for months, hoping to see an update and praying that you haven't given up on us! I totally understand your reasons for being absent and I'm just thankful you are still writing this beautiful story! seriously, I've been trying to find some other VB story worth reading while waiting, but they are so badly written I would chose your writing anyday, with or without your teacher influence! and I re-read all your older fics :)and btw I did get subtle hints of a baby, but black haired Bunny was a total surprise! and I liked it! finally Vegeta's baby with Vegeta's hair! I didn't know there was any negative feedback, I think it's brilliant idea.this is AU, why not? and congrats to you for sticking to your original story and plot! I am with you all the way, no matter how much do I have to wait for next chapter :))
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Reviewed By: christy_l On: May 03, 2010 00:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that what happened in class made you feel bad. Either way, I hope that you got some good out of, learned something new. This chapter was great, but I wished it were a bit longer. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Jo On: May 02, 2010 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very glad you have found your mojo again. Wonderful, simply an extremely enjoyable read. Thank you.
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