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Reviewed By: starbrella On: September 08, 2010 01:38 PDT
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OMFG! perfect ending. that's all i have to say. The whole story was amazing and so very unique. I love ur writing style and the decisions that you made the characters go through. I LOVE IT! I can't wait to read ur other works!
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Title: WRITE A SEQUEL!!!
Reviewed By: Girness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need to read more!!! It is such a wonderful story! -venus
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Reviewed By: Violet62 (nt ) On: August 08, 2010 02:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD, I CAN'T WAIT THE SEQUEL , PLEASE !!!!! I really want them to have Trunks and Bra before this story end. please do the third one. You are one of the best authors ! Please continue your wonderful word. I will always love all of your fics.They are absolutely , truly AMAZING , INCREDICTABLE !!!!!!!
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Title: sequel please!
Reviewed By: preciousjade On: August 01, 2010 15:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing. Please write a sequel to this story! I've enjoyed all of your B/V stories.
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Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 04:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this and am keeping rapt attention to Fixation. If you ever do make a third installment to this I will. . . Oh god. Absolutely love you? Yeah. Something like that. LOLL. This was an amazing installment and I do hope you keep at it!
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Title: the courting prince vegeta
Reviewed By: darkSkiesReignyDei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2010 00:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the courting prince vegeta, that would be interesting to read. i think you have an amazingly endless imagination and blessed with the skill to put it in paper and sweep your readers off their feet. i just noticed that there were some inconsistencies with how bulma spoke in this second installation... umm there is no difference in the manner that they speak. i mean when they explain things you would know that the thoughts came from one person only. there are tiny grammatical errors. so tiny it doesnt matter. anyway, i love it when some writers portray bulma and vegeta in this sort of way,(not always shouting) your vegeta is calm and cool (the way i've always pictured him) but dark and dangerous (the way i've always wanted him to be)... like always say you're a goddess... ;p by the way ummm the ending was cinematic- you know, the ones you always see in movies... i cant wait to see how you'll write the 3rd installation. i've always been curious how the great prince vegeta courts someone. its very rare that he's written to be this affectionate in public... *lost in dream state* it must be really sexy... lolz
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2010 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was wonderful but I would definitely love to read a third installment of this story! I am also glad that you are planning to continue working on fixation soon as well since that has to be my favorite story from you so far. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 10:51 PDT
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Yes, you MUST continue this! Please continue, there is far too much left to be told to this story.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: May 30, 2010 11:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of your best stories! You never fail to make me happy! lol
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2010 07:30 PDT
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I actually really like the end to this, especially if you are going to write a third part to this story. I will agree with you that the plot would be very interesting. Thanks for the good read!
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Reviewed By: Flyrisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2010 06:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYEEEESSSS!!! that's what I'm talking about!!! BEAUTIFUL, YOU ARE SUCH A GENIUS!!! Vegeta is PERFECT in this chapter, keep it on this track and in no time everyone will come together perfectly...Vegeta's reunion with Bulma was superb. And your idea with an actually courting Vegeta is cool and original. Also I have a reguest...I thought if you might make a flashback with Vegeta's session with Frieza when he was thirteen, you know during their fight or something. But all over yes BEAUTIFUL chapter, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Christy again On: May 28, 2010 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swooned reading this chapter. Their dialogue was everything we've been waiting for since the previous story--little details that I had forgotten about. You don't need a sequel to this, but if you want to of course I'll be all over it.
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 09:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please please please do a third story!!!!!!!! and this story Rock!!! it was awesome!!!!!
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Title: *blinks in amazement*
Reviewed By: BlueUnicorn On: May 27, 2010 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, ok, i actually said what the fuck?! and put my hands on my head!But i'm glad you're doing a sequel. This chapter was really touching, no kidding i almost cried. Keep up the excellent work!!!
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Reviewed By: B. On: May 27, 2010 20:44 PDT
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OMG!!! Talk about a way to end this story, didn't see this coming at all. This was a great story, it actually lived up to its promise too, Vegeta's soul was freed. I love your writing. And yess, pleaaase do the third installment ur thinking about.
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