| "Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Reviewed By: Violet62 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 06:53 PDT
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Lovely fanfiction ! Please continue, I truly like your work
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Reviewed By: B. On: May 01, 2010 23:54 PDT
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I'm sooooo happy to see that you're back and you're continuing on with this story. And i'm glad that u didn't let ur writing teacher make u feel like giving up writing this story all together. This chapter was wayyy better than the last one. This chapter actually made me get excited about the story again and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2010 08:49 PDT
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I'm so happy you updated!! I never doubted that you wouldn't come back to one of your stories, I just had to be patient. I'm sorry your teacher made you doubt your ability and writing style, but I for one have been reading your stories for years and have never been disappointed!! Things develop and grow over time through practice and experience and I know that your writing will do the same. So don't worry any more, loyal fans like me will always stick by you!!
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2010 16:19 PDT
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :D so glad you are back! don't doubt yourself. you're a wonderful writer. you would not have so many followers if you weren't! so remember that next time you feel your "mojo" slipping away from you. awesome chapter. i'm really excited to see where you're going with this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2010 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG soooo glad you started this up again. Love this series and just last night I scrolled and saw the title and was hoping you'd update.
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Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: April 25, 2010 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great story you've got going here. Looking forward to the fight sequence especially after reading the on in "Free My Heart" which was very professionally done by the way. As far as your author's note goes at the top of chapter seven, don't worry too much about what the creative writing teacher thinks unless it is for a grade of course I suppose. Most of those types of instructors have a set view on how to accomplish something in text, and it's sometimes hard to get them to see it from another view point. Writing, especially when your writing something for your own enjoyment and pleasure, should be an expression of just that. Anything less and you may end up hating what you produce. As far as this story goes, great detailing as always. And I have got to say I really love this take you have on Bulma. Very unique. Keep up the beautiful work.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: February 27, 2010 14:46 PST
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This is getting SO SO good...i can't believe it took me so long to read this! keep up the great work! i can't wait to see where you're going to take this!
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Reviewed By: B. On: January 04, 2010 16:17 PST
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I'm soooo happy that u decided to make Vegeta's and Bulma's child a baby girl with black hair and a tail. I really hated how they made Bulla look in the show, she was nothing but a Bulma clone. Bunny is a much better representation of the couple. Your writing is really good and I'm happy that ur continuing on with the story. Can't wait to find out what happens next with the battle between Vegeta and Cooler. :D
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Reviewed By: Pigeonina On: December 14, 2009 00:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just finished "free my heart" and I was so excited to find a sequel. I was seriously reading non stop for hours. I've gotta say, one of the best v & b stories I've read in quite some time, you've earned yourself a fan. I think in the meantime I'll backtrack and read your older fics. I am waiting with bated breath for your next installment!
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 19:27 PST
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Well that's sure an interesting development!! Surprised at Lyedra's defection...not that it happened, but that it came so soon. I expected more plotting on her part, but hey, glad to see the bitch exposed for what she is!
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Reviewed By: always here On: December 10, 2009 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything here was unexpected. I was expecting Trunks, and definitely not this soon. We found out for sure the moment Vegeta did! At first I thought it was a Guru-influenced dream passage. Cool that everything's happening so quickly. Can't wait for the next update! Thanks.
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Title: i'm so happy YAY UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Ellz On: December 10, 2009 18:04 PST
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I was so pleased to see a new chapter up! Bunny sounds so adorable
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Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 08:20 PST
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OMG! They have a child! =D At first I was confused and I thought it was just a dream, for I wouldn't have expected a baby other than Trunks. But I think it's a great idea =)
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: December 10, 2009 01:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I hope you update soon! Your creative writing teacher can suck it, you're an amazing writer!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 20:19 PST
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Ohh! Great new chapter! I hope Vegeta can beat Cooler or at least be saved by Goku or something. Bunny is probably going to be a very spoiled child if Vegeta comes back in her life. I can see it. It's a very interesting turn, I like it! Is Trunks going to be born in this too? I hope so.
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