| "Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: July 22, 2009 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! I read Free My Heart a couple days ago and saw that you'd be writing a sequel and I just found it today! I'm so stoked, you're an amazing writer, so talented. I seriously feel like I'm reading one of my romance novels. I can't wait for the next chapter to FMS! Wonderful work! Thank you!
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 15:15 PDT
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So I just finished reading the first chapter and I'm so excited! I love where this plot is going. And I'm even more thrilled for this next V/B fic you have planned. It sounds wonderful and I can't wait. It seems that I may be making more fanart sometime soon :D
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 15:03 PDT
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You just made my day and I haven't even read the chapter yet. Just to see that you updated makes me so happy! This is a wonderful accidental birthday gift ;)
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: July 21, 2009 03:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very promising start of yet another of your upcoming masterpieces I am sure! I love your style of writing and I've been a fan of your fanfics since I first started getting hooked about DBZ, almost 4 years ago already. Can't wait to follow one again till the end, as I used to do with Labmonkey :) You've matured so much since your first few fics that I really hope this will be even better then the last few. Goodluck writing and don't rush -X-
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: July 21, 2009 00:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made my day! Finally the sequel! I was waiting so long, checking every day, if you started to upload your sequel. It is brilliant! Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: forgot On: July 20, 2009 23:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta seems so scary, and I'm excited about the angst you promised. What an exciting start. I can't stand the wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rebeccarue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 22:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have got me hooked already! Can't wait for more chapters!!!
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 22:21 PDT
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I'm currently grinning like an idiot, because of the excitement you've provoked with this story. As usual, with just one chapter you've completely captured my attention and I can't wait for the next one. There are already a bunch of questions I want to see answered. Hope to see an update soon. =)
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Title: Yayyyy!!!
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 19:37 PDT
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You posted the first chapter to the promised sequel to Free My Heart, yay! Can't wait to see more. However will Bulma get rid of this evil woman? I don't like her already (but of course that's the POINT). Maybe instead of her controlling Vegeta with her feminine charms, he's using her. You'd think he'd have learned his lesson from Bulma, after all. I say, go Bulma, get him back for leaving you. Oh, and BTW... no Trunks, after all THAT? ;)
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Reviewed By: pisq On: July 20, 2009 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It's only the first chapter and already so much action! I love it! Can't wait for them to meet face to face. Bulma has beben through a lot since they parted. Finally she realised what Vegeta was trying to tell her at their cell.
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 14:07 PDT
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Yay! I'm so happy to see that the sequel to Free My Heart is in the works! I can't wait to see what happens when they finally discover each other again!
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 12:47 PDT
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yeeeessssssssss. this new story made my day. can't wait for the next chapter, oh, and that other story you're planning sounds amazing. can't wait to read it too!
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Title: Back with a vengence!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 12:40 PDT
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I'm so happy you're back! I've been waiting for the continuation of the first story and you didn't disappoint. I love how there's the possibility of a female rival for Vegeta's affections! Keep up the great work and I look forward to your upcoming story!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 12:09 PDT
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Yay! I've been waiting for a continuation to free my heart. It's fine so far. Of course Vegeta would still do evil acts and of course Bulma would react to that scene that way. I love how Bulma unknowingly became jealous of the other woman and how Vegeta sensed her but couldn't quite pinpoint that it was her. Tension, tension, tension. I love it all. Your writing style is still one of the best in this fandom and your story lines are still just as riveting. I can't wait for your other story as well. I'll be sure to read it too.
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