"Free My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 137 ] |
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Reviewed By: jane_dan On: November 28, 2009 12:17 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this story. please update soon. your stories are like chocolate for the soul lol
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Reviewed By: KisaraGirl On: November 22, 2009 13:01 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome as always! Can't wait for the next update. Waiting here in Holland ;)
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Reviewed By: rev72 On: November 19, 2009 11:28 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: loved the namek story and Guru with his smart subtle way :) looking forward to read more :)
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2009 11:18 PST Comment/Review: There's something very understated, and yet very dignified, about this chapter. Guru's calming presence, I suppose. I quite liked his story about the first and second, as well as Vegeta's reaction to it. The dynamic between them was very interesting, and I grinned when Guru pulled the blue hair from Vegeta's shoulder. He's certainly a perceptive old bugger, isn't he? Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 22:40 PST Comment/Review: Short but very telling. I liked your story about Namek. Very interesting.
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: November 12, 2009 00:56 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so excited! Another amazing chapter added to an amazing story! You're too awesome, please keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: i'll always review On: November 11, 2009 21:25 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like Grandfather Guru. Love the Namekian myth--makes the world even more realistic.
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Reviewed By: Rubine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 13:14 PST Comment/Review: I totally love your story =) Go on this way!!
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Reviewed By: B. On: October 27, 2009 16:34 PDT Comment/Review: I really appreciate that even though ur in skool right now u still posted a chapter. Thanks so much for the awesome writing. Definitely worth the wait :). I thought this chapter was written really well, ur a great story teller and i'm excited to read more :D
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: October 21, 2009 01:02 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my god! I can't believe I didn't see your update on the 13th! Another amazingly beautiful chapter. I love it!! Can't wait for chapter 6!
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Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2009 20:57 PDT Comment/Review: YAY! I was a fan of the first story and now I'm a fan of the second and can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2009 03:28 PDT Comment/Review: I have a clue as to what happened to Bulma during that year. What I don't understand is if I am right, why Goku would have turned against her. I am also starting to feel that things between Bulma and Vegeta may end just as badly as they did before, especially if Vegeta does not show he can change.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 17:25 PDT Comment/Review: *face/palm* Duh, I'm so stupid. Unfortunately I didn't pick up on it until after I reviewed. I'm not creeped out anymore so yay. XD Now I'm even more excited to see where things go from here.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 17:15 PDT Comment/Review: Really good chapter. I'm a little worried about what Bulma was hiding from Vegeta when he took her top off. I mean, it's been a year since they've seen each other so it can't be that she pregnant with his child and that would only leave Goku (which is creepy). I'll trust your judgment though, you haven't let me down yet. I love the rivalry between Bulma and Lyedra, even though it's obvious who Vegeta is choosing (for the moment at least). And now he's walked off in a huff, leaving Bulma alone with the Dragon Balls. Even if he doesn't know that she knows where they exactly are, you'd think he'd at least know that she'd be smart enough to find them when left to her own devices. Hmm... Can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 09:41 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really wanna see a cat fight between Bulma and the other chick. That would be awesome, lol. Except Bulma's human and would get her ass kicked. :( Overall, I really like this chapter, except for it being so short. :( But I'm willing to be forgiving because its the school year and I'm in school too. Keep up the good work.
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