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| "Stream of Consciousness: A LiveJournal Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, "Shippou's Dos and Don'ts of Love" has self-fulfilling-prophecy written all over it. If that scroll was locked away in a secret compartment in an ancient chest that had stayed on Kagome's property for the last 500 years, then it was obviously never intended to be read by anyone else. Now it sounds like it's Kagome's job to make sure Shippou writes it...again...just like she probably made sure he wrote it the first time around. As for "Sweet Pain"...WTF? ROFL! What on Earth inspired that little doozy? Inuyasha's lucky he's got youkai healing, LOL.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Bad Dog!"...what can I say? Except Hahahahaha! You're right, even though the two versions are identical, they are somehow very different. But I still can't get over the visual of either girl whacking their respective inu-youkai on the nose with a stick! As for "Blue Sky"...Awwww. Dude, that is the kind of writing that makes people question if you're really a guy, or at least straight, and if you want my opinion, you should never take such questions as an insult. You've said yourself that you are on a mission to prove that straight men can write gushy girly romance just as well as us skirts, and I would say even with this one piece alone that it's Mission Accomplished. That weather analogy was beautiful, and that scene at the very end, with Kagome leaning against him at camp and him thanking her for the ramen...perfect.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Can't go wrong with crops, ball-gags and strap-ons! I really like "Stress Relief", as silly as it is. Now, "Polishing His Staff", on the other hand…I love! I loved the whole damn thing. Kagome and Inuyasha's initial commentary, their equal surprise at Shippou's commentary, then their reactions to Shippou's *other* comment (especially Kagome's silent thoughts on the matter)…but that twist at the end! Well, it wasn't so much a twist, but you just extended the gag a couple of seconds longer than I was expecting. Totally awesome!
| Title: Sperm(s? Spermoids? What's the plural form?)
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This reminds me of Butteryasha's fic "Hanyou Fantasies", where, in the last chapter, Inu's dick provides a running commentary. Hilarious! Also kind of sounds like Family Guy, except the sperm (sperms? spermoids? plurals, maybe?) aren't little Star Wars shooters... :) (from Testicular Boot Camp!) ~Kiroku Ookami~
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2010 14:55 EDT
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Loved all three of your latest stories. The big question is: did "Spermayasha" come directly after "The Drunken Rematch"? If so poor Kagome is in for one big surprise when she sobers up! Love how clueless Hojo always is, he would probably still try to go out on a date with Kagome after she and InuYasha mate and marry!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..."Just for Fun" was so kawaii! Inuyasha may not have had much of a childhood himself, but that didn't stop him from becoming a wonderful father. As for "Hojo vs. Inuyasha: The Drunken Rematch"...your sequel makes me want to see a sequel! On a side note, WTF? Hojo was going to do a drinking contest with tea? LOL! As soon as everyone started getting tipsy I knew something was going to happen, but I wasn't expecting that little twist you threw in at the end there. We definitely need a third installment of this, at least eventually. Now "Spermayasha", on the other hand, I think stands alone quite nicely. *groans*... This was silly, but it was also kind of cute in a demented sort of way. They actually did the whole "sperm" thing at the beginning in each of the three "Look Who's Talking" movies, too, which is what this more reminded me of than something on Discovery Channel...or does DC also use such amusing commentary? Either way, I'm glad the silver-haired, dog-eared sperm took the prize in the end. Makes sense that he would be a stronger sperm with more of the youkai genes than human. Yay for genetics!
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 17:58 EDT
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As always your stories (long or short) are just great, but I particularly loved "The Hunt" poor Miroku always stalking his prey, but generally coming up 'empty handed'!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can really say about "Green and Gold" is Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... It's only natural for Kagome to feel homesick from time to time, but she definitely made the right choice; her husband will never let her forget that. As for "The Hunt"...LOL. I knew there had to be something at the end there, but I had no idea where you were going with it. Well done! Keep 'em coming...
| Title: Go now!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh kami, LOL. I was really finding it a stretch that Shippou would really say some of those things, but then that tiny twist at the end made it fall right back into Canon-land as far as I'm concerned. I want to see what happens when Inuyasha confronts Kagome...
| Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 14, 2010 04:15 EDT
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AGH! I left 2 more reviews but they didn't pull through... I'm so sorry but now I'll try to remember everything I mentioned. I commented on "Leveling the Playing Field": "Heel, bitch!" is one of the best lines I've ever read, ever. I can totally see him saying it--his face, his stance, then the blushing shock afterward. And "Spirits on my Shoulders" is my favorite piece from your entire work. I only realized upon reaching the end that Inuyasha and Kagome never spoke, and the only ones "speaking" were the extreme halves of Inu's psyche. I love how it is represented here that Inuyasha is the perfect balance of these two, and that Kagome loves and accepts that, and they tell their emotions through looks, caresses, and the ways they make love. Words aren't necessary and Inuyasha is pretty much telling his two noisy "spirits" to shut up cause he knows best. Lemon was also very, very well-written. Tender and hot. Love it! great job!!
| Title: Sunrise
Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 13, 2010 09:22 EST
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I just have to tell you how much I love this one. Inuyasha's childhood and experiences growing up after his mother died is something we rarely see, or it's just glossed over. We know he had a hard time and he went about learning to defend himself. But to actually imagine a single event from that time period and to flesh it out (even in a drabble format!) like this--AWESOME!! Badass kid Inuyasha is someone I'd love to read of more often!!
| Title: Happier This Way; How The Mighty Have Fallen
Reviewed By: norwegianwoood On: March 13, 2010 09:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too funny. TOO FUNNY. I couldn't stop laughing throughout both of these stories. Poor Sesshomaru. Yes I can tell you have A LOT of fun torturing him! Agh it's just TOO. FUNNY!!
| Title: Dirt and Bug Soup
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have kids, and honestly, I have no idea how I would face such a situation, but damn, there has to come a point where if the kid's gonna cry, then the kid's gonna cry. LOL, poor Kagome...she definitely shouldn't have been so quick to pick on Inuyasha and Shippou. That was karma right there.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, naughty Kaede... while I doubt Rumiko truly intended for us to imagine anything along the lines of "While You Were Sleeping", one cannot help but to wonder what the elderly miko did do during her teenage years. As for "Hojo vs. Inuyasha: The Epic Showdown"... poor Kagome, LOL. Umm...steroids? Premeditated with a fake, counterfeit desk? Maybe, if she's lucky, this'll turn into one of those things that for some reason the school just never talks about ever again...like when he blasted away half of the wall and ceiling in the auditorium during the cultural festival. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to that April project!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like "No Regrets". It's 100% canon, in that you have brought to light the fact that he cannot, in reality, magically increase Kagome's lifespan to match his own. It's a wonderful fantasy among the fandom, and one I love indulging in, myself, but it's an invention of the fandom nonetheless. But I love his outlook on life here, that he's going to cherish every moment he does have with Kagome, and finally, when the day comes that it's her body he's watching burn, he will have no regrets. Beautiful. As for "Ayame's Revenge", cute and silly, and inspirational! One of these days, I think I'm going to have a story with Ayame in it, and have her tell him off for real, instead of being "fall-back-girl" when it doesn't work out with Kagome. ;-)
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