| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2017 08:01 PDT
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Ha! I knew I was right about who Devlin really was. Jessa and Ashur
really need to talk and quit pussyfooting around. This is getting
really good. Can't wait to see if Ashur lets Devlin know about
Jessa.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2017 11:45 PDT
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Ohhh My the two of them are about as bad as Gun and Cain ignoring
things and pretending there are no issues. I need them to talk and
stop pussyfooting lol. Poor Jessa she found her family and is too
stubborn to ask out right and Asher is too emotionally stunted to
really see. Your words have a tendency to convey emotions very
well. Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2017 17:32 PDT
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That was painful:( poor kells... did she even say goodbye to Carol?
I have a feeling she's gonna give Ashur a mouthful when she finds
out..
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2017 15:00 PDT
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Ya know... their both stubborn and fool headed and perfect for each
other. God forbid they have a real conversation and figure things
out. Miscommunication is gonna be the death of them >_
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: September 26, 2017 19:23 PDT
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Oh geez.... Ashur you are so dumb... Ben is more observant than
you!! Grrrrr!!!!! Another fun chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2017 18:07 PDT
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Oh thank God for delvin!! If he hadn't been there to help with his
mysteriousness, poor kells wouldn't be here. And since Ashur didn't
have God's sense to get a phone before taking off... that would
have been hell to come home too...
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2017 16:08 PDT
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I have my head in my hands Sue. Let's just find Jessa a new mate,
the current one is utterly ridiculous. Well done for setting off a
chain of events Kyouhei. Kells is definitely the smartest person in
that house.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2017 12:12 PDT
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Way to stick your foot in your mouth Ashur... maybe next time close
the door >_< Be interesting to see how he worms out of it
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: September 21, 2017 04:44 PDT
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Ashur! You big DUMMY!!!!!! Learn to close your door or learn to at
least explain yourself to Jessa! Great chapter Sue! Fun morning
read!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2017 16:07 PDT
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Out of the mouth of babes. Kells may just be the smartest and
funniest person in the house. I'm getting increasingly worried
about this book, its contents and I'm now unsure that Delvin is who
I think he is. What kind of Youkai are these people? Why is Jessa
so key? What kind of Youkai is Devlin? Where are Kyouhei's crests?
So many questions Sue. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2017 10:26 PDT
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God bless kells, I laughed so hard at that. Sometimes it takes the
view of a child to see things for what they are. Thanks sue
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: September 17, 2017 18:43 PDT
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Every time Kells walks in, I laugh! That kid is hilarious! Great
chapter Sue! Your character development is out of this world!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2017 19:40 PDT
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Laith and Carol mates?! And they were so drunk too, did he tell her
about youkai? I don't think he did. Thank you so much for updating
;)
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2017 19:40 PDT
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Laith and Carol mates?! And they were so drunk too, did he tell her
about youkai? I don't think he did. Thank you so much for updating
;)
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2017 19:39 PDT
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Laith and Carol mates?! And they were so drunk too, did he tell her
about youkai? I don't think he did. Thank you so much for updating
;)
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