| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2017 21:30 PDT
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I'm sorry I haven't written in a couple of days, my other was in a
car crash and it's been busy and tough. But your chapters were
something that lifted my spirits during the waiting. Your story's
are always simply amazing. With your wonderful detail and the depth
of each person you bring life to is a real gift. A gift I needed
these past 48 hours. So thank you Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2017 17:03 PDT
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Well I disagree with Ben, Kyouhei is a cub. A big 'ol baby.
Genuinely would serve him right to loose Jessa for a little time. I
don't think I've been this frustrated with a Purity character since
Cain. Don't get me wrong, Ben was a very close but this, he's
making a right mess. What is he trying to prove or disprove? And
poor Kells, his mother figure wasn't where he wanted/needed her due
to his aloof father. Jessa is young so her outbursts and misgivings
are expected and can be forgiven. Gah. Just g.a.h. Thanks for the
update Sue.
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2017 11:10 PDT
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Poor Jessa she's really confused, Ashur needs to talk to her
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2017 09:53 PDT
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I had allowed myself to forget just how bad Ashurs parental units
had treated him, to be so twisted in their thinking to go so far in
dealing with their child and feel perfectly justified in doing so.
The fact that he can love Kells so readily is really a testament to
his heart. Now if only he can stop putting both feet in his mouth
up to his hips with Jessa...she is so young and confused, and he
cant see he is making it worse...sigh
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Title: Mean Cliff
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2017 11:52 PDT
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I'm here always reading whenever I can sneak some time away. When
they're together it's hard to remember just how broken Asher really
had been. That last scene brought it back and sooo mean for that to
be the weekend cliffy lol.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2017 09:18 PDT
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Ugh I wanna throw something at him! Men I swear! This was your
moment to let her in and you ruined it! So what if Ben is there, he
for one would yell him to get over the age difference thing since
we saw how well that was working for him. Ugh.... Have a good
weekend Sue!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2017 08:28 PDT
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Well he bare minimum explained Hana to her. They need to have a
real conversation that doesn't involve ripping each other's clothes
off before or after. Or burn them off I suppose lol. I do envy the
just chop off my hair cause it's tangled and will grow back in the
morning. And ponys for everyone!!!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2017 17:52 PDT
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So Devlin met Manami before? Wonder what will happen with Ashur and
Jessa. I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2017 17:51 PDT
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So Devlin met Manami before? Wonder what will happen with Ashur and
Jessa. I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2017 16:10 PDT
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He dunked her in the pond and then told her she was beautiful. LOL,
I don't think it doused her fire at all...or his come to think of
it. Devlin is pretty smart when he isn't around Nami, isn't he.
LOL, he is turning out to be a pretty good friend, isn't he. Wonder
if it will be able to stay that way when WHO he is comes out. Ashur
called Jessa his sun goddess. He's pretty poetic for such a grumpy
guy. LOL
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2017 06:08 PDT
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Since that time in London, huh Devlin? The irony of when this all
comes out will be hilarious. These two really do run hot in their
emotions and physical reactions towards each other but yet neither
knows where they stand. Let's hope Manami' s words come back to
Ashur in post coital bliss. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: September 04, 2017 21:03 PDT
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Whoa! Hold up! Did the condom break?! Kells makes my heart sing!
Love his hyperactivity! This story is fabulous! I get excited for
every update!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2017 05:17 PDT
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I like swans... I'm sure you do Devlin. I died with laughter at
that scene and I noticed that he helped heal the eagle's
wings...maybe he can help Manami. I'm not above begging for this
pairing Sue. Consider this me begging. As for our resident fire and
earth Youkai...Kells will provide a distraction and laughter but
they are in danger of hurting each other. Jessa is beginning to
feel used and Ashur is holding on to guilt. How in the world are
they going to work this out?
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2017 09:34 PDT
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I like swans lolol what a wonderful pick up line lol loves it Sue,
I'm so glad kells is finally home, it's hilarious he rather cuddle
Jessa... maybe it's because she smells like daddy too... :)
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2017 12:17 PDT
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Omg... so much has happened. I've been sneaking moments away at
work and home to try and catch up and all of the lovely chapters.
I'm so happy that they finally got together, then Ashur has to go
and make it seem like she has to be a secret that he sneaks off to
meet... then Hana showing up. Realizing you love someone is hard,
figuring out how to help fight their demons is harder. Especially
when they don't give you much to go on to help. Ugh! Men!
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