| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: nikeie On: December 06, 2002 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really is great. this could have happened, but most unlikely. But it still is a really really really kewl story. but bulma shouldn't put vegeta through that... he really is a very kewl person! (as u can tell, my fav.) but i h8 peeps calling him veggie, if u wanna shorten his name it's geta, plz peeps!!! :) |
Reviewed By: nikeie On: December 06, 2002 16:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
sorry!!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 25, 2002 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAH! a fantasy dream.who would of thought that was coming..lol aggh!! new chapter needed badly!! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 19:33 EST
Comment/Review:
wonderfully done, as usual!!!!! good luck with ur new boyfriend...*see unlike other ppl, i read AN's and like to offer encouragement!!!* now what about MY celibacy streak? but that can be dealt with, i'm still battling with bio hw. LOL great great great chapter, now i HAVE TO GO REVIEW on the 'she hates me' songfic, cuz it is just sooo funny!!! ~ciao, cya in the next review. keep up the good work. I'm assuming this means that the fic is almost finished? |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love the suspense!! hehe, well great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: CherryKitty On: November 23, 2002 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE GET THE NEXT PART UP!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 06, 2002 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my kami! you lil evil person!
If I knew how to cry I would because that was so sad! but so good! I mean well written!
But sonce I can't cry and i never will
I hope that vegeta comes back to his love,
bulma. I really hope so.... |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 17:36 EST
Comment/Review:
wow, you've gotten more reviews over one fic, than i have in ALL of my fics, can you say *pathetic?*, apparently ppl like kinkiness more than they like angst. i wish it really wasn't so. whatever. great chapter. that was the weirdest thing though, puar and Yamcha...ew...ciao, g2g...be looking around for the rest for ur fic soon!!! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 09:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shudders* The more we find out about Yam-baka the more scary it is.......Keep it up :D. This is a well written story but I HATE the last cliffy. You are so evil. When I came across that cliffy I felt like shakin' some sense into you. Hmm so Puar's feelings are revealed, ne? I always knew the freaky flying rodent had it for Yam-baka like the pale doll thing has it for Tenshihan. Hmm anywho PLEASE PUT OUT THE NEXT CHAPPIE FAST FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI! Bura-chan
PS- Okay maybe I misunderstood your review K-chan but the little V/Y interludes are the sicko Yam-baka's fantasies for the delicious, delectable Veggie. *shudders* Hmm maybe you can have Veggie ACCIDENTLY castrate Yamucha with a ki blast, Tina.
ANYWAY your story is pure genius. ^_^ more please. |
Reviewed By: WH Y ME!!!!! On: November 18, 2002 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT AND LEAVE ME AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT. IM SO MAD AT YOU. DAMN IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON. IM PRACTICALLY FALLING OUT OF MY CHAIR |
Reviewed By: K-Chan14 On: November 18, 2002 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I think you are doing a great job. I thought this was pretty original since it kinda has that little y/v hinting on the side. LOL! Don't see that very often. But I thought it was pretty different for a B/V. Keep it coming I don't like being left hanging like this... :p lol anywayz...c-ya later.
K-Chan14 |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good thing I have good bladder control...I was laughing so hard I would've wet myself otherwise! Great Chap. |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 19:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hehe, yamcha's gay and into beastiality! and herpes!! good god! that could make her lose the baby! no way is she gonna sleep with that ass yamcha! i forbid it!! lol and vegeta doesn't have to declare his love for the whole congregation! just loud enough for bulma to hear...after all that's the only person who really needs to hear it!! cliff hangers are sheer torture!! more!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 18:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo!! CONTINUE!!!
PLEASE!!
If you're gonna make Vegeta sing, don't make him sing to a redneck instrucment like a bango or somehting. not a ukulele. those things are dangerous. I tried playing one and the strings gave me a cut on my tongue. Don't ask -_-' MAKE IT KAREOKE!! ^^ HORRAH!! ^^ SUgar is good...*shoves sugar cubes in mouth*
CONTINUE!!!
Vegeta better say the words or something...... |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 16:19 EST
Comment/Review:
OH PLease spare us all that misery! Don't make Yamcha sing!!!*Wails in anguish* Alright, too many reeses pieces for me.....Anyway it's great and I hope you hurry up and get on with it ^_~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
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