| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!! Poor Vegeta and Bulma. If only Vegeta wasn't a prideful hot bastard. if only he at least said he liked her!! Then none of this would have happened. What? Is he gonna make 'classic' wedding spoiled scence at the 'Speak Now or Forever holds you peace?' Or it would be funny, if Bulma said no, and then he run in alittle while later making a fool outta himself!! ^^ Heh. Sorry......just a bit...hyper
CONTINUE!!! CAN'T WRITE FOR A LEMON!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
technically i have to be doing bio hw, but i checked in on my fave fanfic site, and guess what?! you updated!!! you just made my night!!! of course that was pretty...well, sappy, not quite up to your usual style, but sweet all the same. i LOVE reviewing fics, oh, and guess what? keep an eye out for me pplz, i have a NEW fic coming out soon (to add to my what 5, 6? already) this time itz an original (see this is shameless self-advertisement). whatever. just check me out over the course of um...the week...and you'll see it. good job on this chappie, can't wait till ur updates on either or...til then
luv ~n. |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 17:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i'm bak, and i decided to sign in this time. that was hilarious!!!!! I LOVED LOVED LOVED the part where you had b/v argue about who was going to be on top, that was just pure PURE genius...how come i never thought of it, never mind, just for future notice: can i use it? i'll definitely footnote it back that you inspired me, but in all the fanfics i've read, more specifically: lemons, never ONCE had they had bulma and vegeta argue about that. that was great, and soooooo funny. but one thing, how come Bulma can't just say that the baby was born like 6 weeks premature ( i was) nm, i don't understand the whole concept of childbirth and i don't intend to for the next twenty years. you outdid yourself again, have fun writing, or doing whatever it is you do ^_^ ciao till next time. ~n. |
Reviewed By: Lina On: November 04, 2002 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last 3 chapters were great! Damn that Vegeta for leaving!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Vegeta comes back. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: November 04, 2002 09:28 EST
Comment/Review:
hmm, write the next chappy soon please.
curious to what comes next, hope our Veggie comes back soon :( |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 23:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Not that I'm happy about the Yamcha engagement, but it's well written!! ^^ AND I GOT CREDIT FROM A KICK ASS FAMOUS(in fanfic terms) STORY!! WHOPPEEEE!! CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: K_Chan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you are really doing a great job writing this fanfic! You really do good on getting the characters personalities right, it makes me nautious to read fics when they don't have the characters done right, unless it's for humorous reasons...then I just laugh! :p Anywayz...keep up the good work, I hope you update again soon!
K-Chan |
Reviewed By: Patty On: November 03, 2002 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC ITS DIFFERENT FROM ALL THE OTHERS I'VE READ KEEP THE CHAPS COMING!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vegetasgirl9 On: November 03, 2002 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep up the good work!!!
Bulma ~n~ Vegeta
2 lovers
+2 gether
__________
4-ever |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 15:11 EST
Comment/Review:
Next Chapter: Bulma does some crazy shit …
*Gets very very scared* OMG no she's not sleeping with Yamcha! You can't make her do that! *faints* |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BULMA DOES SOME CRAZY SHIT?? OH SHIT!!! X(
She's gonna do it with him isn't she?? OH GOD> PLEASE PLEASE PLASE PLEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEE don't write a lemon between them, orrr....actually, how about you write a tiny tiny lemon between them, not with too much detail like you VB lemons, and have Bulma screaming out Vegeta's name?? o.O HEH HEH HEH.
CONTINUEEE!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 11:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your frequent updates! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 19:59 EST
Comment/Review:
please continue! this story is great! (u need more Yamch-dick bashing) i hate his guts please more Yamcha bashing! and o yeah continue! |
Reviewed By: Lina On: November 02, 2002 13:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Once again you wrote another great chapter. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x --> too lazy to sign in On: November 02, 2002 12:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn hot!!! you read mine, so i'll read your's LOL. this is sooo good, just the perfect combo of romance, sex, and angst, which i am sooo damn fond of. great job, hope you update soon!!! |
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