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| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 18, 2002 15:26 EST
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OH FOR THE LUV OF KAMI JUST LET HIM SAY IT!!!!!!
I NEED TO READ THOSE THOSE...WORDS COME FROM HIS MOUTH!!!! BULMA ESPECIALLY NEEDS TO HEAR THEM!!!
*whispers* oh and make goku come out of nowhere with a vidoecamra ranting on how he caught it on tape that vegeta luvs bulma and how he was going to send it "the worlds most funniest videos"!^_^ | Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 18, 2002 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one of the best fics i ever read...alomost lol agh update some more it was and is a great fic! | Reviewed By: sayian_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 13:40 EST
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AAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGGG just say the words | Reviewed By: Legana On: November 18, 2002 08:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooooo, don't make him OOC. if bulma has a little sense left she understands his pride and sees his love for her in his eyes!!
you cannot have passion sex without love for each other, come on, I thought Bulma had to be smart, neurotic woman.
looking forward until the next chap, cannot wait! | Reviewed By: Legana On: November 18, 2002 08:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my kai...
that was such a great chapter! so romantic...so deep...well done =) the lemon wasn;t that good,but it doesn't matter, the rest of the story was just so cool..*sighs dreamily*
I love your imaginations, you're a great writer!!
and to all the flamers of her: shuv it,. go bother someone else, if you don;t like the story, stop reading it, but don't nag about it like little children. baka's.
anyway, I'm gonna go on reading, loved this chapter, it moved me to tears a bit :/ | Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: November 18, 2002 06:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm.OK...I have to tell you, Yamcha is really starting to freak me out! What an idiot...Vegeta's gonna kill him. And Bulma will be damn lucky if he doesn't kill her too! Great chapter as always! | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 21:08 EST
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nice nice nice, did i mention that i'm typing up the last segment of my update to Yin and Yang as we speak? in fact, it should be up within the hour...LOL ciao, great update. Yamcha and his tiny self, damn he's perverted. | Reviewed By: CherryKitty On: November 17, 2002 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story, i feel sowwie for trunks, but he grows up to be dam sexy, so its not that bad, its a sweet love story, its kinda up there with ghost! keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SPPPPEWWWWWW EWWWWW YAMCHA!! *barf* OH GROSS!! HOW COULD YOU CAN WRITTEN THAT ABOUT VEGETA!!! *shiver* *throws lemon at your head* SHAME ON YOU!! SHAME ON YOR! UGLY BABY JUDGES YO!! X(
Anywho, GREAT CHAPTER!!
dammit it's always the the 5 minute too late thing
OH GOD DON'T LET BULMA MARRY YAMCHA!! JUST FOR ONCE MAKE THE STORY A BIT HAPPY TO FINISH!! X(
CONTINUUUUUE!!
I mentioned this in my other review b4, bulma and Yamcha were going to get married, but then she says no, then like 10 minutes later Vegeta bursts in trying to stop the wedding, and he makes a painful embarassing fool outta himself!! *giggles* Vegeta's such a cute lil stud.
CONTTTINUUUUUUEEEEE!! | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:14 EST
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veg had better get there in time to stop that god awful wedding!! and that scene when yamcha was fantacising bout vegeta *shudders with revulsion* but kinda funny. he thinks himself a genius? poor guy is deliusional as well! and what the hell is wrong wiht bulma? after all she saw *yamcha wanting to screw veg* she goes ahead and says yes..again? grrr some one needs to smack bulma upside her head...i hope veg kicks yamchas ass into oblivion and marries bulma himself! ok, i'm done...if you can't tell from my ranting i luv this chap! more!! lol | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 13:46 EST
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Eeewww,*Shudders* Yamcha is a nasty bastard...Him being gay explains a lot though.....Anyway, Update soon, because I want to know what happens!!
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* | Reviewed By: ZeroCool On: November 17, 2002 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just where do you get the idea that Yamcha is bisexual? I mean, it is just odd. Vegeta had to stop their wedding, unless you want to write a threesome of Y/B/V. | Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Tina. You really are evil! I love it though. Can't wait for more! | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i loved chap. 13&14! i cracked up at the 'shuddered involuntary' 'feelings' hehehe
but the wedding...i thought that they had decided to call it off? no? or am confusing this with one of your other fics? well n e who..LOVE IT! more! me want more! | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 13:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the weirdest thing has been happening, for some reason, when i log on to see what authors have updated, and whatnot, i ALWAYS seem to miss your's. and since i know you're SOOOO good with updates, i finally did a search for you. imagine my shock *gasp* when i realized you updated THREE chapters, and i had no clue...urgh, frustration definitely settled in. Well...i'm bak, and that's all i have to say on that subject. THAT was a pretty funny two last chapters, with the dream and all. I thought it was pretty cool to throw in Robert Frost's poem. In fact, when you first announced that part about the paths, it was the first thing that popped into my brain. I love that poem so much...'and it made all the difference' LOL. anyways, job well-done, and btw: Yin and Yang is like *this close* to being updated...if you update before i do, you MUST advertise it, and then ppl will review, and then i'll feel compelled to post sooner. LOL, JP, you don't really HAVE to, although i'd love you forever if you did!!!! =P. great chapter, and i'm looking forward to an even greater update. | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
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