| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibi On: November 12, 2002 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh!! that is such a cliffhanger! It's hilarious what you made yamucha in this fic.. haaha.. can't wait for the next chpt!! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 05:48 EST
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I know what you mean about not being able to look. It's kind of like a car wreck. You can't look, you can't look away. Good luck, Bulma! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 17:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm baaaaaack!!! and i must commend you on a job well done. very very cute, the whole bi thingy goin on, never would've expected it, but certainly bought some humor to the events. oh, and a lil goodie: the next chapter of Yin and Yang is *almost* finished, like i have to write the last few parts, and a small parting AN, so it should be up by the end of this week. i'll be looking for ppl's reviews...ahem. |
Reviewed By: -----wow----- On: November 11, 2002 14:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was ... interesting ^_^ actually, it was: great job ...... i luved it!!!!
(wow) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 10:59 EST
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woo hoo!!! making fun of yamucha!!! he he...and making him bi...(laughing uncontrollably) |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 15:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter, but next time give out new lemons!! X(
UNFAIR! BOOOO!! *throws fruit at you*
but anyways,
GREAT CHAPTER!! CONTINUE SOON!!
(btw, the beginning wasn't a flame, you understand right?? =)) |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm...i've never read DB fics...but now..well..hehe..gimme more! |
Reviewed By: NYLACE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 02:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too big of a cliffhanger...update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh shit ... OH SHIT!?!?! There's GOT to be more than that!! *is so hyper from reading all the chapters in just two days--which is a stretch for her* How could you ... DOOOO this to me!!
*collapses to the floor*
*slowly... pulls herself back up* Goddamn, this is one of my ABSOLUTE favorite fics now!! Why?? Because like Vegeta I just can't concentrate and keep coming back for MORE!?!?!??!
*will write something more indepth-- like she usually does-- when she's not SO damn hyper*
*a LONG time later, comes back* I feel bad for Bulma. Why?? Well, the part about the shit hitting the fan (a great expression). I feel bad for her ... but at the same moment I feel like her inner voice that wants to kick her ass for lying so much! But then... *sigh* ...I kind of know how she feels(but I'd NEVER admit it!). *shrugs* What can I say, most of us still dream of OUR Vegeta ... and are DOOMED to shudder that we may be with a YAMCHA!! (whatafrickinsickopervejerkinitwhenthey'remakinglovesotenderlyinthenextroom!!! eweweweewewewewewew!!!!!!!!!)
Oh, a little note, that thing you wrote about your sister ... that was damn mean. BUt.... FUNNY as HELL!!!! XD
Speaking of things that are funny ... I actually laughed out loud when I read that chapter where you "tried to be funny but didn't think it was." That was SO funny!!!! Oh and I liked the line, The Saiyan Prince had come home at last. O.O
*tsk tsk tsk* ... that was just BAD!!! Am I the only one who sees the double meaning behind that!?!?! *LMAO* I'm...never...gonna...sleep..to...night!!!! *falls onto the floor in fits of laughter and is never heard from again* |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 19:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thatz pretty disturbing at what you had Yamcha be doin' at the end of the chappie, but hey, each person to their own tastes. Great update!! you totally made my night!!! hope you keep up the great work!!!! okay? have a great evening, i'll be looking for your updates soon! ayt? |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 18:27 EST
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I tried not to burst out laughing when Yamcha found them together, it's just to good to be true! This fic just keeps gettin' better an better... |
Reviewed By: jodie On: November 07, 2002 16:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent. love this story. but im not sure im guna be able to remember the internet address so could u plz email me on 99h12@blake.staffs.sch.uk when the next chapter comes on plz. (im upto chapter 10) thanks
luv jodie |
Reviewed By: Mina On: November 06, 2002 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fanfic! Totally enjoyed it. Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! So good!! hehehe ^-^ Me likes a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Lina On: November 06, 2002 11:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see Vegeta back! I loved the chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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