| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: su On: November 04, 2011 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bulma, you are so insecure. Great story so far. |
Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:22 EST
Comment/Review:
XD
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Lil o me ... or was it someone else?! :P On: November 27, 2003 10:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ignore peeps who say that they don't like Bulma's caracter or whatever ... people: this is still an fanfiction EVERYTHING CAN HAPPEN ... if u really wanna stick to the real stories ... go make one yourself ... Anywayz on with my review :P ... just love it expecially the voice in bulma's head ^^ really love ya story Tina ... aplaus for u girl :P Bye!
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Reviewed By: Miyu On: July 04, 2003 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I had to stop reading it Chapter 10
you make Bulma sound like a COMPLEATE Fuckin idiot.. LIKE what a LOSER, I'm sorry, this story makes me WANT her to be alone, she should get a taste of her fears.
What a loser. I'm glad you didn't get her sleeping with that “baka human,” who know WHAT STDs she would put apon herself. But you say she is genius , it DONT sound like it. It sounds like her Self-confidants is SO LOW, that she makes herself look ugly, IN EVERYWAY In which case, Vageta wouldn't like her.
I like all your other stories, but you do tent to make Bulma feel ugly, fat and OLD ALL the time. I don't know.. bluh.
this story makes me HATE bulma, *barf* |
Reviewed By: juuachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 11:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl that was an awsome story you wrote. Girl I almost cried,I love you for putting this on because this is the most descent story that I've read in a long time! |
Reviewed By: Dazen On: February 08, 2003 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I worship thee I worship thee. I really loved your story and if you do decided to do a part two please do it soon. you had me worried for a minute at the end though. I didn't think that they were gonna get back together. Keep of the good work |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Loved It. Ignore Flamers. |
Reviewed By: CherryKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 10:08 EST
Comment/Review:
please do a sequel! ur so talented! |
Reviewed By: K_Chan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 00:03 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey I think it would be a great idea to do a sequel. I like this story and I think you have a lot of talent as a writer. If you decide to do a sequel please e-mail me and I will check it out. My e-mail is SaiyanK_Chan14@hotmail.com. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a very involving fic! Anyway I liked it! And I do think you should write a sequel!!! Well done! |
Reviewed By: Princess Selene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 17:09 EST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this story it was really different. |
Reviewed By: Kandy (not signed in) On: December 26, 2002 01:50 EST
Comment/Review:
she's kind of harsh, and evil. But, I can see the reasoning. Why only have one,
when you can have two? And STILL get what you want! Yamch is a loser though. I
must agree. She's also kind of funny too. I don't think anybody can just have sex once?
I belief its an unconsious addiction. Then again so is gambling~and nicotine. Well, cant
win them all. And I believe wanting to take a shower should be contagious and an addiction.
For obvious reasons.
If she knows she can't sleep with Yamcha, o boy, just forget it. too complicated.
Loneliness is a crime. What can I say? I'm glad she isn't making out with Yamcha any
more, that was just digusting me. I'm sorry. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: December 26, 2002 01:25 EST
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I think 6 year olds no more about the...a-"deed," than she does. What about porn? How could she be so smart, but yet so dumb? This was a really sweet lemon. I espcially like the end. "Love, Tina" Never seen that before. Nice work.
I knew it was Vegeta! No, I didn't. It could have been Goku, for all my sick mind was thinking. But~I wasn't thinking that. Thank you very much. And I do not think jealous is cute. No way, I'm jealous kills. Killing isn't cute. Unless you dress your victims up like Barbies... |
Reviewed By: Kandy (not signed in) On: December 26, 2002 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now sex "just happens" really smooth. Nice work. Although, what Bulma/Burm.. said in the begining had me off a little. Like she was talking to herself in past tense.(?) weird. Other than that, pretty good! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, what a wonderful ending!!! I LOVED this story...from start to finish. Don't you DARE give up writing fanfics...I'll have to hunt you down and force you to write at gunpoint! LOL...you have a lot of talent girl and I look forward to your next fic! |
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