| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rita On: April 13, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a real enjoyment to read. This story has had me riveted to it since page 1. You have a wonderful style of writing. Please continue you have me very intrigued. I need to know more. Please!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear about your mom. I hope everything works out.
Man, I can't believe she lost the baby! How did the rest of them take the news?? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tori On: April 09, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but it would be great if you'd finish it!! I can't wait!!
-Tori |
Reviewed By: sunny On: April 08, 2003 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,
This was such a well written fic! I have become totally immersed into your story line. Perhaps because we all fantasize about a similar thing- having an anime hunk come to life. Mmmmmm. ^_~ This is sooo sad right now though. Sniff. Please update this as soon as you can. Good luck with your trying times as well.
~Sunny |
Reviewed By: 411 On: April 08, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I think its great, I can't wait to know what happens next. Please update soon, I was almost crying reading chapter 14 so please don't leave me like that. |
Reviewed By: lizzy On: April 08, 2003 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! She couldn't have lost the baby! *grabs twilight by the frount of the shirt and shakes violently* i can't beleive you made her lose the baaaaaaaaaabyyyyyyyyyy!! *falls on the floor crying/wailing* WAAAAAAAAAAA! Your so MEAN! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 08, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! THt was such a sad chappie! What is going to happen next? Umm.......... Tunks.... *slaps myself in the head*. How does Trunks feel about everything? And what about Vegeta at the lose of his grandchild? I'm hoping that you will have time to update, and that your mom feels better. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was powerful to that and i hope everything goes well for you and your family. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cries very, very hard*
SO DAMN SAD!! ITS NOT FAIR!!
I'm so sorry you've been having a hard time :( life is never easy, but no one should be put through the bullshit you have been... *huggles*
Anyway... Great chapter as usual!! I look forward to your next installment!! |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your fic is great you should write more! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 04, 2003 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
.The suspense is killing me. It's been a month since you last updated, were all waithing for chapter 14 to be up. So pllease update. |
Reviewed By: leena On: April 02, 2003 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!! I'm sure i'm not the only one who's just dying to read the next chapter. Alas, I do hope you have time to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 28, 2003 01:02 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffs** It's bein so long since you last updated and I'm going crazy! The suspense is killing me! *Walks off and jumps off a bridge, but doesn't die**** Ahhh..... I hate you.... Please update soon or the Trunks lynch mob will kill him,,,, we have him!!!!!!!!!!!
*sitting in an asylam talking to herself**** |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 19, 2003 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello people I 'm going insane. Krimson please update soon I cant take the suspense anymore, god please Update soon. I'm sure everyone is waiting for you to upadte, I hope you don't have god damn writers block. So please update soon................ |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 16, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.
Pweety Pwease. |
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