| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rina Kai On: March 13, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been back here for a long timw! Great fic, it creates such an intense image of the charachters. I really love this fic and I hope you will update soon. Make her have twins, Boys...... |
Reviewed By: Mina son On: March 13, 2003 17:43 CST
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Hey!!
Aren't you going to update yet? It's lets see too many days with without an update. Me go Crazy now.
So please update soon........... DIE TRUNKS DIE.... MUWHAHAHAHA. I don't really mean that. I have a question. Okay Trunks has recovered from his mating insictinces. Is Trunks like, feeling guilty becausee he forced you to be his mate and everything, and also the case of rape. |
Reviewed By: leena On: March 08, 2003 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter thirteen was great, just like the others. It was nice to know how they reacted towards the situation at hand. I do hope you are able to post up chapter fourteen!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BishounenChaser On: March 08, 2003 14:44 CST
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Oh wow I love this fic so much! It's the best self instertion fic I've ever read please continue |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your storry but cant take the suspence....*waits*...... nope hurry up!
itz so sad ----------buh byez |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 06, 2003 16:56 CST
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Hey! I can't take it anymore I come to this site to look if you've updated. But no there arn'et any updates. So please update so and when I ask that I think am speaking for all the leaders of this fab fic.
^ ^
so please update................... (~_~)
(u u)~
~ ~ Mina |
Reviewed By: lizzy On: March 03, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! you should make her have twins! a boy and a girl! Anyway I'm obsessed with your Fanfic, PLEASE CONTINUE! I check every day for updates! also, could you say how many months pregnet the girl is. Did you ever say her name?
*scratches head*
If you did then i just can't remember. Oh well. |
Reviewed By: Mina son On: March 03, 2003 17:31 CST
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Another question pooped into my mind. Seen she leaves right.... it's been two weeks or someting. Shouldn't the saiyians run out of grocerys, if so how can they pay for it since, none of them work?
They do need money. My first guess of one of them working would be gohan. Goku's never worked in his damn life. Vegeta's a KING, and he does'nt like working. Goten..... lets just not go there. It would be halirious to see vegeta, with a spautla in his hand working at a local restraunt as a chef, but then Vegeta would probaly get pissed off and destroy the whole god damn thing. |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 03, 2003 17:24 CST
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I know this is getting anooying. But I love this fic and really want to read more. So please update. Know I really wanna join the lynch mob... even thought Trunks is my favorite character. I wouldn't mind givving him a kick is the ass to see things thourgh. I think that Gohan is right. If Trunks would only look at the situation rationally. One Question how old is the charchter in the fic???????????? Well, I'll come back tommorow and annoy all you guys soome more!!! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 03, 2003 17:10 CST
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Please update soon. The only reason I'm on the internet usually is to read your fic and check almost every frikin day is to check if you have updated!!! Just to tell you, you have relly captured Vegeta's true pesonality in this fic!!!!
He rallydoes care about family the most especially his linage. So please upadte soon......I'll be waiting. Love your fic. And I know I'm probally getting really annoying. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 13:09 CST
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Oh yeah...and I agree totally with Mina Son or...whatever her name is that reviewed just before me!! What is Trunks thinking this whole time? Where is he actually during this whole thing? Did he finally agree to find her, and if not, how did they know where she was and how are they on their way? ^_^ Great story! I'd love to get some of these questions answered! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 13:07 CST
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OMG!!! Yet again, another two chapters that are both extremely well written and that never bores me to stop reading. This fiction still remains in my top favorites. Please update as soon as possible!!! ^_^ Thanks!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Trunks is icky... O_o;; ^^;; (At least in this fic he sure is being one hell of a dick! O_o) |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 02, 2003 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have one question, where the hell was Trunks that long.It would be so funny if he was stalking her. and another one, Goten said that they were on the way right, but I thought Trunks didn't want to go look for her?????? Makes you wonder about him. I really hope she doesn't have a misscarriage. Vegeta would be so pissed. I wonder if he would go hyserical and go an a rampage destroying everything in sight.......
And oh yea, how come Goten never makes that much of an apperance? I really wanna know what Trunks really thinks of the whole situation! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 19:31 CST
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GAAAH!!! YOU EVIL EVIL AUTHOR!! CLIFFHANGERS ARE GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF ME!!
*cries pittifuly*
Gods what's happening to her??? PLEASE update soon!!! I NEED to know whats going on!!
*sits idely by, waiting for her chance to lynch Trunks... the bastard!* mee hee hee |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
get to her fast. Oh shit what a way to end that chap in a majior cliffhanger. wow great story and keep up the good work |
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