| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: S.W.H On: March 02, 2003 12:21 CST
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Oh yeah, I fergot sumthin; BOOYAH! I was right about the suicide attempt to bring Trunks' head outta his ass! I'm good, I'm great, I'm fuckin awesome! ^_^ \m/ |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: March 02, 2003 12:18 CST
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You suck!!!! That was by far the cruelest cliffhanger in existance. But I liked the chapter. Trunks is a bastard and Vegeta should most DEFINATELY beat his ass. And he did act like a rapist at one point...gods! He's such a prick! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:22 CST
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ooh, this is not looking good. can't wait to see what's next. update soon. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 09:15 CST
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Ahhhhh! Excellent chapter! Just one spelling error - decent. :) Even so, I have to say that I'm so curious and just plain confused by Trunks' behavior! What the F&^*???? I knew that Vegeta would be pissed! Please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 01, 2003 21:03 CST
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Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.
enough begging please update soon.!!!!!
I'm waiting.............. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 04:27 CST
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Ahh yes.... the first wave of hormones of pregnancy, how I remember them well. Couple that with the actual feelings from the rejection of Trunks and I can't even imagine. Ok... Trunks better show up soon or I'm going to have to pick up a letter opener and join the lynch mob!
Request! Longer chapters? Pleasssssssssse? :) |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 27, 2003 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was an okay chapter (12). I really wanna know whats happening at the house that you ... the charchter left behind. How is Vegeta taking the concept of losing his grandchild? And totally why Trunks is acting like sucha bastard.. well he realy is one. since Bulma and Vegeta weren't married. Oh and If you ever decide to publish a book please tell me. I think that you really should become a writer. And what's the main charachter's name? Did you make like, if you did'nt state the name we, as in the readers, would relate and feel the pain your charcther is feeling. I realy do't care if the charchther has a name or not your fic is great. I'm looking forward to your next update so please update faster. And remember how I told you to put your fic on FF.net, don't, that site sucks now.
^_^ ^_~ ^o^ )> |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your fickie its so sad........... ^_^; read mine and ill keep reading your............ write more now i dont think i can keep away!!!!!!!!!!!! *waaaaaa* |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: February 27, 2003 18:10 CST
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Yay! I hope you keep it goin! I luff this story! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 12:32 CST
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So now it sinks in...
Great chapter.
Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 25, 2003 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god..... I acutally cried reading the fic. Belive me, it's usually really hard to make me cry. Your style of writing is superb. Please update more often. You should post your fic on ff.net. I love this fic......... I hate you now.... no I don't. So please update soon.
A dedicated fan. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 25, 2003 20:32 CST
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Trunks is SO damn mean!! Why does he have to be that way? stupid jerk... *mumbles something about taking a baseball bat after the bastard...*
Anyway, this last chapter was so heart breaking!! You did a great job with conveying emotions... you're very articulate
please update soon... I'm really looking forward to how this will all end up!!
*slings her baseball bat over her shoulder and grins wickedly*
Oh Truuuuuuuunks... I've got a surprise for yoooooooooooou |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sad...... does it have a twist this storry is cool! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 15:19 CST
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Wow...I haven't checked back on this in so long!! I really love this story, and I still can't believe how different and unique it is.
The whole conception of Trunks being a totally different being than who he is displayed as on the show and all the characters crossing over in a way like this is totally original. I really love it!
Please try and update EXTREMELY soon, I don't think I can survive without it!
^_^ Thanks!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: leena On: February 25, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your chapters were well worth the wait! I just love your writing style! I just hope you have the chance to update soon!!! ^_^
Keep up the wonderful work!! |
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