| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 20:50 CST
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Hey here's a funny thought. What happens if one of her friends stop by to visit her and find her house beat to hell and full of hot, muscular men who are constantly fighting but she's not around? Heh heh. I know, it has absolutely nothing to do with your story. just a silly little thought that jumped in my head. sorry, back to the review now.
So she's going to leave, huh? I'd probably do the same thing, but somehow I can't help but think she's not going to get very far because of the baby. Vegeta wouldn't let his grandchild be raised not fully understanding its Saiyajin heritage, even if he's not happy about the circumstances.
Whoa, did I write all that? Okay, I'm gonna shut up now. Please update soon. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I hope some one stops her, If not trunks then it should be Vegeta. lol I like this story. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:41 CST
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Wow...great turn of plot! Is Trunks going to show up and stop her from leaving? WIll he follow her? Will vegeta forbid her from actually leaving? Eeeks!
One question - what does she look like? And what's her name??? If you left these intentionally unknown - then I'm really impressed! It really makes it so much easier for the reader to imagine it could really happen! :) |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:29 CST
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WOAH... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 23, 2003 22:33 CST
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*cries* this is getting SOOOOOO good!!! PLEASE PLEASE *PLEASE* write more soon! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 20:02 CST
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I don't normally read these type of fics, but I was intrigued... and your writing lived up to its promise. What an interesting perspective! I really like the plot and look forward to next chapter :) |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: February 23, 2003 20:01 CST
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Yay! I need more! I must have more...you kinda owe it to us anyways. I can picture a suicide attempt to bring Trunks' head outta his ass. I never liked him anyways...I'd rather have his daddy! XD Mmmmm...Vegeta...he makes being a cocky son of a bitch look damn good. Did I mention that I dun really like Trunks? |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was really good keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 13:19 CST
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Damn, I want to pound Trunks' sorry ass into the ground, set fire to him, and then run over him with my car a few times for good measure! What a little shit! Ugh, I'm too angry for words!.....
Update soon. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love the angst! Its almost too much to bear. This is a wonderful story, the depth and angst of these all too often romanticized guys of DBZ is great! So refreshing! I can't wait to see what happens! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Sony On: February 21, 2003 18:22 CST
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Yay! You updated! Are you gonna update sooner and more often? I REALLY like this story! It's so kewl! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 20:07 CST
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ok... now you REALLY made me cry!!! this is just getting so SAD!! sad is an UNDERSTATEMENT!!!! you rock, you know that right??
Whats gonna happen!? is "she" gonna survive the pregnancy?? what about the psychotic Saiyans back at "her" house!? *cries even harder* tell me tell me tell me!!!
please update soon!!!
and why can't i flog Trunks? he's in need of a good public beating i say!
~_^
I'll be back soon! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 14, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I've read this fic about times already and I need new chapters to read. So please update. I usually don't request people to update. Your so lucky heh......................
Please tell me what happens next is Trunks going back to his world? Will she die? Will Trunks tell her the reason, he cough...::::raped::::.... her?
so please tell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rina Kai On: January 31, 2003 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updated now or I will never red any of your fics.
Just kiddin' so next time when I come back to this site there better be an update. I like your cliffhangers and all but update. I f there isn't a update I will start giving you bad reviews even if there NOT TRUE. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: January 29, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please updated soon. I've read lots of fanfics but I only review really good ones. Your's is the first one I've reviewed. Please update. I love your plot it's so original I never imagined Trunks would do that he's usually blushes galore.
I really love this fic so please update. Today would be nice. |
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