| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelica_lisa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2012 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first review on sites like these, but I just wanted to say that this is a great read. I hope sometime in the near future you come and update. I look forward to reading more chapters. :) |
Title: beyond words......
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2012 09:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best v/b stories i have every read.....awesome |
Reviewed By: LaurenGuest On: July 14, 2012 18:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update!!! It's been over a year!!!!! :( |
Title: Yep
Reviewed By: Cromeron On: May 16, 2012 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She'll update when she has time, hold your horses. I know you've been waiting a while, but you never know, the author could have something going on in their life right now where they have no time to write. No point in demanding an update. =] |
Reviewed By: Kamey On: May 15, 2012 17:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
why won't you update *sniff* ~____~ pleeeeaasseee |
Reviewed By: Laurenlee On: May 08, 2012 02:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! I've been waiting for almost a whole year!!! |
Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Amyyy On: April 20, 2012 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the most amazing fanfics I have ever read. I really like that it's not like other fics where they have a lovey dovey relationship. It truly is amazing. PLEASE update soon?:)Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: kisskusje [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2012 13:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ah man pls update soon! I want to read more more more :3 |
Title: umm negative
Reviewed By: Tian On: March 11, 2012 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
For years I've loved this fic but reading back now i think it's just horrible. There are some discrepancies in the story line of your writing though it's AU and some of the construction is just a big turn off. " rumors of Kakarot killing his brother over male lover?" "be my demon lover?" Hwriting fanfics put some effort into your writing and don't make turn into a cheap comedy in some parts. |
Reviewed By: Nikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2012 01:50 EST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA! She was a terrorist!!! That single line made this chapter for me. |
Reviewed By: Nikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2012 01:23 EST
Comment/Review:
I like how it's developing slowly between them (the romance, that is). Is it weird that I find it funny whenever Vegeta nudges Bulma with his boot? I mean... it's just really funny when I picture it. |
Reviewed By: Nikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2012 01:13 EST
Comment/Review:
I found it extremely funny that Bulma was laughing at the King, and he was oblivious to it! I found your story in ff.net, but I'm a pervert so I tracked it down to here. I'm glad I did! |
Title: I love slave
Reviewed By: Laurenlee On: January 09, 2012 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally check back ALL THE TIME to see if you've updated yet... Please update soon! I'm dying for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Alex1489 On: January 05, 2012 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent 12 hours reading this and I MUST know what happens next!! Please update!! This story is so addicting! I am loving how you portrayed Kakarot. He's absolutely vile and vindictive but at the same time he has a soft spot. Love it! |
Reviewed By: kisskusje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2011 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's a wonderful story! Please update soon, I look forward to the next chapter! I love the way Vegeta and Bulma communicate with each other in this fic it's so dark |
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