| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Title: Spelling
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 22:47 EDT
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"Well, if you're serious about not being able to see Vegeta until he's out of his mirror, how about you keep me occupied?" I think you mean meeting. =] Great updates!
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Reviewed By: please update! On: October 17, 2010 21:36 EDT
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ack! i am SO glad you've updated this! I have followed this story since the beginning, and I cannot wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 11:16 EDT
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thank you for the reason to stay in bed a little longer today! :) great update
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Reviewed By: girness On: September 03, 2010 01:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a loyal follower to this story since the beginning. I really love this story,and I am really happy that your are trying to finish it. The summary of the whole story really helped a lot too. Please update as soon as possible! -venus
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Title: YOU are amazing.
Reviewed By: YellowNinja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2010 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey. This is my first time reviewing your story (hides behinds hands), I just found it a week ago and I have just finish read the last chapter. I feel sort of bad for not reviewing your other chapters... But anyways, I think you're an AMAZING writer, what ever, if its about sadistic monster so be it! I've enjoyed this story and am totally gonna start on your stories. I hope you have time to read this :) YN.
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Title: S&M OK - Yaoi *shudders*
Reviewed By: HardCandy On: May 26, 2010 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must start by saying that your style is quite enjoyable and one of the best i've read. However and don't get me wrong, i'm pretty open minded ,why does yaoi always have to make every male character gay with such odd pairings? I have nothing against gay people,but was that really necessary, considering that Vegeta is like the pinnacle of raw manhood in dbz!?! Other than that, I have been griping to my chair to read the next chapter, it's a really good fic. Most sincere congratulations!!! ^0^V
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Reviewed By: supersayaman On: May 20, 2010 20:57 EDT
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very good fanfict so far i wonder if you will incorparate any kind ofplot into this or will it just be sex.so far this is a very good story and you are discribing things good.this sitte has many gfood authers.its a pity fanfiction.net is driving their good authers awawy from their site.l
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Reviewed By: supersayaman On: May 20, 2010 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
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so far its very interesting. i wonder how bulma will ajust to life with ho ever b uys her.hinty hint prince vegeta
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Reviewed By: jkbgdeyfhvbsud On: April 23, 2010 03:25 EDT
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im so glad you started writing again
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Title: Amazed!
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're continuing! Gosh, I couldn't be happier! I hate reading stories but this is the only exception that I read over and over again! Your writing style is fantastic and comes together very well. Besides the few spelling errors, which are seriously very few, I would say this fiction is perfect! Thank you SO very much for updating! Now that it is updated, I have to read it all over again =]
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Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 03:25 EDT
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You rock. Thanks so much for being willing to finish this fic! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: shadow'sgirl On: April 13, 2010 15:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im soo glad ur continuing this story!!! i had followed it on Adult fanfic but after like a year of no updates i had kind of given up!!! Does this mean that u will continue working on some of your other stories? I used to visit your homepage and it seems like it is no longer in service. So im just wondering if you're just gonna finish "Slave" and be done with writing or if you will continue writing V/B fics...Im glad ur back!! oh by the way, not that you owe anyone an explanation but im kind of wondering what kept u away for sooo long???? any hints??? u should at least give a hint ...lol...ur really famous amongst those of us that continue to read V/B fanfics well into our twenties!!
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: nathysama On: April 12, 2010 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE!! I WAS SO WATING FOR THIS, YOU MADE MY DAY!! I´LL KEEP WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! GOOD TO SEE YOU'RE BACK, SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 22:53 EDT
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where the fuck have you been!? /glomp
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 16:36 EDT
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Permission to squeal? *ehehehheheheeeehhheee* ok wow, i am so happy to see you renew your devotion to this story i may luv yu and wish other authors were able to do the same,
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