| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: kineatic On: May 02, 2011 02:23 EDT
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ah you're my fav lemon writer in the world man woop woop :'D pls update soon youre amamzing xo |
Reviewed By: shadess On: May 01, 2011 10:19 EDT
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I enjoyed reading this fic alot. I cant wait for an update, and i hope life doesnt get in the way. Your writing style is great and I have never read an amzing fic like this. That is something i rarely find. You're so talanted girl keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: TenshinhaN On: April 30, 2011 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is absolutely amazing! I love it, but plz don't write a lemon on Goku or anyone else hurting Bulma like that again! I dunno how much more i can strees that! I really dislike vegeta being such a ?#/)=#+&/'#&=(&=*'`%', but i won't say anything... Your fic is great and everything, but did u have to make Goku so... violent? I mean he could have acted like he hurt Bulma but didnt have to do it in reality ..Your writing is amzing though and I only wished that you would update more!! Who cares if the chaps are short, as long as you update :D I'll review again if you so happen to update . XXX love you |
Reviewed By: gorexx On: April 30, 2011 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
meep please don't let kakarott, geta or bulma get killed :'(( ahhh it would break my heart x-x |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 21:11 EDT
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Wow. Not that I think anything that Vegeta did was right (trust me, i don't condone rape in the least and if this was real life I'd hate Vegeta), but he's seriously a manipulative genius. I admire his talent and ability to manipulate people. He didn't just hurt them physically, he broke them. He's the chess master and their his pawns who are doing his will while he makes them think it's their idea. |
Reviewed By: kayla ki On: April 28, 2011 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i lovee this chapter many people try to turn vegeta into a big teadyyy bear but truth be tolddd hes a monsterrr, and i absolutely love the way you portray vegeta , you were the key inspiration for my version of vegeta in my fanfiction . Im in desperate need of a mentor and reading you stories helpsss alottt . I hope it turns out as good as yourss. AWSOME STORYYY |
Reviewed By: Yamchachan On: April 28, 2011 13:23 EDT
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poor kakarott & bulma :'( ah i really want to spank vegetas butt right now.. PLEASE UPDATE! I NEED TO READ!!!! ahhhh will bulma an goku have a happy end? or does she get ..happy with vegeta? ahhhhh I need to know pls ple pls |
Reviewed By: Great On: April 28, 2011 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a while, and I just can't stop. I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for you to update some more. |
Reviewed By: update soon! On: April 28, 2011 08:16 EDT
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i was beginning to think you had disappeared again, and we wouldn't get to see another chapter for a few years :o( imagine my surprise and happiness when i saw this pop up as updated! please please PLEASE, pretty please update soon! it's torture waiting this long in between chapters. i remember when this story was first posted! keep up the AMAZING WRITING |
Reviewed By: Gohans Onna On: April 27, 2011 21:30 EDT
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I hate it when people dont review. You go girl! Awesome chapter! I hope you finish this story soon! |
Reviewed By: Yay! On: April 27, 2011 17:49 EDT
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That was great! I thought you had abandoned this fic, and when I just randomly checked to see if there was an update, there was! I was so excited, and now that I have read this chapter (which was fantastic) I'm even more excited for you to continue. :) This story is awesome! I hope your next chapter comes soon. :) |
Title: Made my day!
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only found your fic a few months ago, so unlike your followers that have been with you from chapter 1, I had the bonus of reading your years work all in one go - which was awesome. But then having to wait for this chapter made me appreciate even more the time and effort you put in to all your chapters! Also, I loved how that in an instant, by making Kakkarott the bad guy, Vegeta was able to get back the control over her that he lost when she left him. Well done, and can't wait for number 57! |
Reviewed By: Littlekely [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 15:19 EDT
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Though rape is not ok, I absolutely loved this chapter. You did a good job of capturing the pain that Bulma is feeling. Updat ASAP. |
Reviewed By: kichu On: April 27, 2011 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More More More please!!!! You're such a talented writer. I can't get enough of your stories so pls update more if you have the time :D |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 13:20 EDT
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What a sick, twisted thing to do but I knew something was bound to happen when Vegeta had walked in on them earlier. Bulma's taking comfort from Vegeta but she also said that she hated him as much as she hated Kakarot so I wonder how that will effect their relationship. Then again your version of Vegeta doesn't seem to care all too much about her love for him so maybe he won't mind. We're still seeing him being obsessed with her but I really do wonder if there's anything in him that wants Bulma beyond lust. Oh well, I have to wait and see won't I ;) Hopefully he'll do something before Bulma uses herself as a sacrifice. Can't wait for more. |
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