| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Title: Yep
Reviewed By: FanFiction.org On: May 19, 2015 04:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Full version on FanFiction.org =]
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Reviewed By: Typicalteen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2015 17:56 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of your work. First off, I don't think of your work
needs editing. Secondly, I'd like to tell you...that when I was
urged to read 50 shades...and started to read it...my first thought
was 'Slave was so much better...in content and in writing.' This
work should have been published in place of that piece of crap
honestly. I've read this one at least 10 times and still get many
thrills from it. If I could buy a copy of this I would. Keep up the
great work.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Tabbykitty21 On: July 19, 2014 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never expected this story to update, when I got the email update
I was so excited! I'm so glad you found the time to add another
chapter, it's always such a thrilling read. Thank you so much for
updating, your story, creativity and vivid imagination have
produced something impossible to stop reading and wanting more
of... even years after it first started! Whether you continue to
write more is your own choice, anything updated to this story I
will be here in a flash! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Bella~Bee On: September 22, 2013 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I originally started reading this on fanfiction.net but I don't like stories edited, I like the original versions and I'll have to say I'm glad I found the unedited version! Although at times the story is super dark n violent, I still love it! I think it's super original too!! I hope you continue with this story as I can't wait to read what happens next! |
Title: Sad
Reviewed By: Frownyface On: May 21, 2013 01:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for an update for two years... WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
Title: Great
Reviewed By: jordansmom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2013 23:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more. Plz update soon. |
Reviewed By: Ac On: March 02, 2013 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzers! Great fic you have here, please please update! |
Title: Eva21
Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2013 17:24 EST
Comment/Review:
I love it. Please continue |
Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2013 00:50 EST
Comment/Review:
Please, please finish this. I really enjoyed reading this story... So please update! |
Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2012 02:06 EST
Comment/Review:
I really hope you could finish Thai story..... |
Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2012 02:06 EST
Comment/Review:
I really hope you could finish Thai story..... |
Reviewed By: Cotton lollies On: November 05, 2012 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me tell you... I LOVE YOUR STORY! I was hooked from the begining! I got a little bored on the part wth ilandra though. (p.s. Im greatly sorry for the loss of your loved one) |
Title: I hope she forgives Kakarot!
Reviewed By: Deirdre On: October 19, 2012 08:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much angst in the lasts chapters! i really hope Bulma forgives Kakarot and they can be together... i hate Vegeta right now, he's gone to far to punish them out of jealousy |
Reviewed By: Deirdre On: October 18, 2012 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this fic yesterday, and i absolutely love it. I wish this was a Kakarot/Bulma/Vegeta fic >. |
Reviewed By: LittleLostKittenofDeath On: October 15, 2012 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the very first fic I have ever commented on. This story really has me hooked, read from chapter 1 to 57 in under 10 hours. For once, I can say I prefer Kakarot over Vegeta... feels almost blasphemous to say. Please update asap :D! |
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