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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 12:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YoYo I love this fic. It's sad to hear that you're losing your love of writing fics. You've always been one of my favorite authors, and infact I took a writing break for almost two years, but with reading this fic and a few others I have been reinspired to write, and to continue a fic I've been working on for almost five years. I can't wait for the next chap and I love all the different relationships. Although I must admit the Frieza stuff is a bit eww, but at the same time awesome. I don't know that many people that can write him well.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 12:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi just read your story, its brilliant, just the sick kind of thing i enjoy reading, can't help it, anyway hurry up with an update please...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: mimika On: August 20, 2006 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love this story, and I've only found it a few days ago! yep I read the whole thing and it's AWESOME. please update!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 13:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! It's original and so much more dark and sinful then all the other Bulma and Vegeta fan fictions out there. I only hope that you don't take too long to update.
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Title: KEEP WRIGHTING
Reviewed By: Blognarf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 03:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story i know it sounds stupid of me to say but i read 15 chapters for 5 hours one day and the next day i was addicted and from 8 pm to 7am i finished your story which was to chapter 45 so 11 hours that night in all 16 hours of my life was reading your story. The thing that suprised me was that i never read. i hate reading but your story mad me want to read on. please update becuz i am looking forward to reading chapter 46-47-48-ECT..... please keep it up!
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Title: i am the 666 review! freaky!
Reviewed By: hiei and the cherry On: July 21, 2006 16:03 EDT
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awesome story!!! it totally rocks and im only up to chapter 18!! woot! congrats and bravo!
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Submission On: July 13, 2006 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos for finishing; very understandable to have moved on, though please take my thanks as your story had a great influence of sorts on me when I was younger & since about a year and a half ago I figured out what it meant & pieced it together. Sounds stupid, but just thought you should know.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 23:11 EDT
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Frieza is an asshole of a father. Bulma never catches a break and now I feel kind bad for Ilandra. Glad you updated!
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: July 11, 2006 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chapter! thank god you updated! i was like "blah i don't wanna go online cuz i'll be bored" then i looked in my inbox. It's about time Illandra started to get the beginings of real spine in her. freiza is just lame..but i've always thought that. Yay! action! tahnk god...this story would not be the same without action. lol. ~alex~
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Title: please update!!!!!
Reviewed By: Omg Its KT On: July 10, 2006 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like this fic and i've noticed you haven't been updating for a LONG while..=( oh, can you please finish the story soon?? I'll be back to check on it ASAP!
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Title: B/V fanfic Fanatic
Reviewed By: Azaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic and I am so sad to see that it's been a while since it was last updated! I hope that you find some more inspriation and finish this masterpiece! You're writing is just amazing and I love Bulma and Vageta and how you portray them in this story. the Plot is fantastic! Please finish this awesome story up! ...please. Azaria
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Reviewed By: 85characters [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 01:10 EDT
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When i first read tis stroy it had been awhile ago but b/c i had forgotten its name i couldnt get back to it. i eventually forgot bout it but now that ive found and seen that u dont really wanna continue ur story. I know its selfish but i just wanna know could u rap it up really quickly in like 5 chapters please.
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Reviewed By: The Resident Otaku On: April 20, 2006 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no!! nononononono!!! that can't be it!! where's the link?!?!?! this is so unfair!!!! c'mon!! *ahem* this story is like nothing ive read before! seriously!!! i've never read a fic with gay/lesbian scenes in it before but YIKES!!!! this is seriously twisted! YOU are seriously twisted!!! i gues that makes ME seriously twisted for reading it too!!! omg!
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Reviewed By: PhenoMkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its the best ive read. u gta write more!!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Melak On: March 28, 2006 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on writing; your the best
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