| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jumpin Juniper On: May 29, 2004 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do enjoy reading this fanfic - although I, along with many other people I imagine, am desperately waiting for V and B to get back together again. Something tells me that when it comes to those two, love aint in the air!
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Title: Excellent work
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I love this fic. I've been reading it since last fall. You do have several spelling/grammar errors sprinkled throughout the fic, but with a story this size, it's understandable. Your plot is exquisite, the wait between chapters is excusable, as this story sticks in my mind so well that time is not an issue. Only one other author is capable of writing which such a captivating skill in my eyes, Darke Angelus. And if you know how I feel about Darke's work, then you will see that comparing your work to hers is the highest compliment I can give. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 19:42 EDT
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I like, I like! it is very nicely done! Im thinking of drawing a fanart for your fic...very good S&M....bondage...*drools*. Well, update your other fics soon, and good luck! (would u check out my fics too? no one reviews them...they just read them and leave...) T_T
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Reviewed By: freaky-grl1 On: May 28, 2004 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you update soon!! I love this story!! And the dark-haired woman... I wonder who she really was:P;)...
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 01:12 EDT
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Well, guess it did log me in...interesting, and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again another great chapter, keep up the good work. And it was far from meaningless. Has it really been a year? Doesn't seem like it. Wow, this fic has kept my attention for a year, Kudos on that, Well, update soon, okay?...stupid thing wouldn't let me log in.
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 21:09 EDT
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Annother chapter well done! I hope that your arm feels better soon! Congrats on "Slaves" one year anniversary; I remember when I first started reading the fic and all the twists and turns it has been through. This chapter was not at all useless; it's nice to hear what's going on in the sexy Saiyan Prince's sexy head. *drool*
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Title: well then...
Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: May 26, 2004 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like how you set the scene in this short chapter, and lena the servant hmmm wonder who she is?...lol......i just wanted to mention that sometimes instead of writing princess zucchhini you put illandra's name. ~alex~
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Reviewed By: Danger Girl 2-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fan-freakin-tastic!
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: kriss On: May 26, 2004 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write! I feel the set-up which makes it that much harder to wait for the next chapter!Love ya!
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great chapter, but...it's already May 22, it's been over a month since you've updated. What's up with that? That last chapter had some spelling errors, hence the 8 and overall 9. Please please,please,please,please,please,please update soon. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: alisha freaka bear bear On: May 17, 2004 09:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fink yor stori sux becuse u make fun of HOW MUCH VEGITA AND BULA LOVE EACH OTHA!!! HOW DAR U MAKE FUN OF THEM?
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Reviewed By: alyson On: May 16, 2004 18:35 EDT
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do vegeta and bulma end up together? b/c it doesnt seem to be going that way, i mean bulma hates vegeta in this right?
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, another wonderful chapter. I love all the twists and turns. Your writing is exquisite, and the wait is always worth it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SideShowSmonkey On: April 21, 2004 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely!
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