| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 01:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!!! MORE MORE MORE~!!! |
Title: wowzers!!!
Reviewed By: ~Blue Dragon~ On: September 03, 2003 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!
I luvved it!!! moooorrree pleeeezzzeee.
(i'm dying here....)
^_^
~Blue Dragon~ |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 13:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awwww, I hope you feel better soon. ^_^ I really liked the chapter. The ending was really good. As for how you should update, I think you should do whatever you feel comfortable with. Your writing is always good, so you don't need to worry about quality when trying to get it out quickly, and I'm always willing to wait if it's for one of your fics. |
Title: secerts
Reviewed By: bananda On: September 02, 2003 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I guess I can wait longer for a well-written chapter. Its hard to be patient when you find something good to read. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual this fic just keeps bringing home the gold. I love every chapter you write!! please keep going we're lovin' it! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 19:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good luck with your new boyfriend!! I hope you'll get more chapters out soon. Your writing is soooo good, and I'm dying to find out what happens! The chapter was great as are all your other ones! |
Reviewed By: bluebubble On: August 24, 2003 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is by far my fav keep up the gd work!!! |
Reviewed By: Miyu On: August 23, 2003 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegetagoddess
wow this was really good, I was scared of Vegeta at first, but then, I wasn't as I got to know his charater, but now I'm totally freaked of him again, LOL
I want to read more B/V fics like yours, but I can't FINED any!!that I like, which is good on your part. some that have good lamons, made Bulma sound like a fat ugly OLD pig, and I can't see Vegeta liking someone like that. What inspired you, or what did you like? can you help me? |
Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: August 22, 2003 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!! Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! I cant wait to see what will happen. who will get there first. Vegeta or Frieza. DUN DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: August 22, 2003 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Enjoymetn factor is higher but they dont have a higher number!!!!! I Love it!!!!!!!! this lemon was the best. as you said. I JUST LOVE IT!!!! |
Reviewed By: kitty girl On: August 20, 2003 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on iv bin cheeking this alot and you still havent updated pleas hurry with the next chapter and make em long pweez |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 11:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was way over impressed with your story! Loved it! :)
~Ami |
Reviewed By: psycho On: August 10, 2003 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!! If you don't post another chapter soon i'm going to shit kittens in anticipation!! Please keep writing!!! Are Bulma and Vegeta going to somehow get back together? Just curious. |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: August 03, 2003 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god stoped me jest in time had the knife and every thing jk but sorry to hear bout the stresfull life must suk anyway hurry with the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Dark Demigoddess On: July 31, 2003 15:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great Job! *though, I must admit it was a little short* I can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!! |
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