| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: July 30, 2003 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is definitly what i like!!!!! I love your fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry about me being like a five year old when i read very good fics!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: July 30, 2003 21:10 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~^_^~ |
Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: July 30, 2003 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR GETA!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pan0gwen On: July 30, 2003 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it!!!!!!!! rereading the first few chapters are going to be sooo great!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe!!!!! |
Reviewed By: kris On: July 30, 2003 00:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE update soon! This story is so addictive. That was a good chapter, it just wasn't enough to satisfy. I guess that is the point. |
Reviewed By: Betty Boop [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a gross but cute chapter at the same time. I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 19:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miko On: July 29, 2003 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better. Continue the good writing! To make things even more juicy, there should be some yuri action between Bulma and Ilandra. |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 29, 2003 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEVER expected Ilandra to think of Bulma like THAT!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: July 29, 2003 02:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
HeY! remember me? yup im back... a lil more mature and subtle ..but NEwayz im only on chap 15 cuz im backtracking to refresh my memory! i hope ur still the great writor that u were back then(maybe a lil better in the grammar department :ob) just kiddin
*MUCH**LUV* |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you finally updated! So Ilandra really does have a thing for Bulma...well, that makes things more interesting! Please update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Louise On: July 27, 2003 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue as soon as you can! You've made me depend on this fanfic like a drug, I'm totally addicted, and I love it! You can't let Bulma leave with Ilandra and desert Vegeta like that! Surely they must feeling something significant for each other?? Don't keep me hanging by a thread!! A brutally gripping, raunchy, sexy and undeniably FANTASTIC fanfic! You do justice to DBZ! |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: July 22, 2003 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter once a week my ass dude come on hurry up dont flake on all your fans keep writing. pleas dont turn in to one of thouse people that jest flake on there stores you got real talent sadistic talint but talent none the less jest hurry and write more k thanks |
Reviewed By: Kikadper On: July 20, 2003 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lena, that was such a good chapter, and I REALLY hope there's more.. There better be *shakes fist threateningly* LoL Luved it girly. |
Reviewed By: Venus On: July 19, 2003 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg your fic is so cool!!!!
I'm just wondering if Vegeta and Bulma would love each other?
Is Bulma pregnant?
hm... o ya please update soon!!!!!!!!
The suspence is killing me
Life has no meaning
life has ceased to excist (well not really, but ya catch my drift)
please update
please update
please update
(p.s. cool site ^.^) |
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